dyn 5 Posted November 10, 2012 Share Posted November 10, 2012 http://soundcloud.com/plu6mi9us/poly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 10, 2012 Share Posted November 10, 2012 I like it, but would like more variations. Too repetitive imo, but a nice melancholic start for sure. I'd play around with variations of that melody line, flip it, shuffle or add notes, see what works best and introduce this later one. Maybe using another sound? It has enough potential. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dyn 5 Posted November 10, 2012 Author Share Posted November 10, 2012 Thank you for your comment, i will see what can i do ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted November 10, 2012 Share Posted November 10, 2012 i gotta agree, its a bit repetitive. but this really sounds nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted November 10, 2012 Share Posted November 10, 2012 Agree with everything that has already been said. Also, you should add some breaks as well because nothing much really happens. But it sounds great so making the track more exciting should be easy for you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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