Guest BillyMcTreeSnap Posted April 6, 2014 Share Posted April 6, 2014 :3 Konnichiwa, mina-san. Feedback? https://soundcloud.com/clockwork-tickler/yukominki Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cryptowen Posted April 6, 2014 Share Posted April 6, 2014 :3 Konnichiwa, mina-san.are you a 17 year old japanese girl? because if not then CUT OUT THESE VILE SHENANIGANS RITE AWAY Feedback?Overall it has a nice overcast atmosphere, but I'm not getting a compelling melodic sense from any of the individual parts. I feel loathe to suggest less variation, because lord knows there are too many amateur idm throwaways out there relying on the same three note pad swoops, but a bit more of a clear-cut theme would get my ears perked up a bit. Heck, doesn't even have to be a repeating melody. A lil bit of rhythmic swing in the notation (as opposed to constant dispersal) goes a long ways Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest BillyMcTreeSnap Posted April 7, 2014 Share Posted April 7, 2014 :3 Konnichiwa, mina-san.are you a 17 year old japanese girl? because if not then CUT OUT THESE VILE SHENANIGANS RITE AWAYFeedback?Overall it has a nice overcast atmosphere, but I'm not getting a compelling melodic sense from any of the individual parts. I feel loathe to suggest less variation, because lord knows there are too many amateur idm throwaways out there relying on the same three note pad swoops, but a bit more of a clear-cut theme would get my ears perked up a bit. Heck, doesn't even have to be a repeating melody. A lil bit of rhythmic swing in the notation (as opposed to constant dispersal) goes a long ways I actually am a 20 year old Japanese girl. Ai I agree on the melodies, working on making more distinct melodies. I appreciate the descriptive advice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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