granty Posted December 23, 2014 Share Posted December 23, 2014 What do you reckon to this? Added this ending on today after ages of not knowing what to do with it - which sounds cheesy as fuck, but I kind of like it: https://soundcloud.com/lo_five/step-inside Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tricone RC Posted December 23, 2014 Share Posted December 23, 2014 Stepped inside, was not disappointed! Didn't think the ending was cheesy or out-of-place at all, flowed nicely Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted December 23, 2014 Author Share Posted December 23, 2014 Nice one! Been over-thinking it probably. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
olo Posted December 23, 2014 Share Posted December 23, 2014 Digging step inside. It's like I'm riding in a handicapped cart at a grocery store by myself after hours. Going up & down aisle after aisle. I stop in the canned goods aisle & peruse the soup cans. Lot of camera pans & wide angles. I continue on after making my choice & head down to the produce section to get some bread bowls. (about 3 :20 in the track) That's when I see "her". Soups on bitches. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted December 23, 2014 Author Share Posted December 23, 2014 I can really see it - that beautiful and serene picture you painted with your words. I hope it works out for you guys. I'm guessing you selected tomato and basil? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Electric Kitchen Posted December 26, 2014 Share Posted December 26, 2014 i wonder if the percussion could be slightly louder in the mix with just a touch of reverb to give it some texture? just an opinion. otherwise a nice listen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted December 27, 2014 Author Share Posted December 27, 2014 i wonder if the percussion could be slightly louder in the mix with just a touch of reverb to give it some texture? just an opinion. otherwise a nice listen. Cheers, yeah wasn't sure what to do with the drums tbh. Not even sure if acoustic drums were the way to go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
olo Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 I'm guessing you selected tomato and basil? Naw, I'm an American dude. This: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted January 5, 2015 Author Share Posted January 5, 2015 Lol what the fucking hell mate, you guys are spoilt rotten Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
olo Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Lol what the fucking hell mate, you guys are spoilt rotten Yea, it's disgusting really, but I make no apologies. Your track is stuck in my head btw. thing: The chordal synth notation at 1:02 may be incorrect. Sounds like it's out of place. Doesn't seem to jive with the rest of the tunage. But that's me. carry on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted January 5, 2015 Author Share Posted January 5, 2015 Yeah it's a bit of a random blues note I think, just to mix it up a bit, I thought it'd stop it being too repetitive but just seems to stick out and annoy people. Good it's stuck in your head though, I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
olo Posted January 5, 2015 Share Posted January 5, 2015 Good it's stuck in your head though, I think. fo sure, whatever that sweep is that comes in @ 1min. & the end got me. I'm a sucka for that vibe. It's the glue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 6, 2015 Share Posted January 6, 2015 some nice melodic bits in this, 80's vibes, I like that cat wailing synth slide section :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted January 6, 2015 Author Share Posted January 6, 2015 some nice melodic bits in this, 80's vibes, I like that cat wailing synth slide section :) Cheers. That's actually a guitar riff I reversed then chopped up and loaded into a sampler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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