Guest Glass Plate Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 I guess it's electronic music? I dunno. Hip-Hop? -.- not BOCish though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mrx Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 this is alright, but those saw waves are too high in the mix(lower them) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 good drum programbing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TEXX Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 Fuck! Those saw waves are hideous! Lower them and i will listen again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Glass Plate Posted April 12, 2007 Share Posted April 12, 2007 ok fixed that, I suck ass at leveling/eqing and shit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TEXX Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 The backround noises are way too loud, but this can easily be fixed. They also stop kinda quickly. Maybe fade them out or have some reverb/delay going. This definently needs some more mixing, as the saw waves still seem to be "crushing" the other sounds. On the other hand: I like the chords the saw plays, and how it works with the background sounds (what is that?), and when the saw wave drops out and the vocal+drums start going off on their own i found myself really enjoying the track. It's nice, albeit very rough around the edges. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Glass Plate Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 yeah im a shitty producer, I need lots of practice in that factor. The beggining sample is a storm warning they play in my area when large storms are coming in my town. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ten fingers ten toes Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 I didn't like the first most of it, the end part where an 808(ish) sounding drum kit takes over for the "drill" stuff was much nicer, the vocals chilled a bit too and synced up and everything. More like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest taxman Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 yeah the end is pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest geographyhorse Posted April 13, 2007 Share Posted April 13, 2007 yeah the end is pretty good Downloaded it.... I'll listen to it over the weekend and tell you what I think of it...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Iain C Posted April 15, 2007 Share Posted April 15, 2007 I quite like this, it's the vocals that are the hook for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Glass Plate Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 could use a lot of fine tuning to make it better, but I doubt I will ever do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest geographyhorse Posted April 16, 2007 Share Posted April 16, 2007 not bad..... I thought the lo-fi quality of the voice sample did not quite match the hi-fi tones of the mix. I'm not sure how to articulate that better? Perhaps, try to use some effects to dirty up the saw waves or something. Actually, I would dirty up the drums at parts, giv them some slight static or something. I am a fan of lo-fi sound myself, and I have nothing against hi-fi, but it is just a personal taste of mine that for lo-fi samples to fit in a mix, there must be something else present to sort of show them off. Also, I didn't really feel that the choices of reverbs quite matched at points. Overall, it was enjoyable. Don't take what I say harshly, I'm just making suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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