Guest locum76 Posted October 30, 2007 Share Posted October 30, 2007 hi all. i've added a new track to myspace from the album i'm working on - its called 'take flight'. please listen and let me know what you think. www.myspace.com/loc76 cheers. loc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yanG Posted October 31, 2007 Share Posted October 31, 2007 begins quite lovelyly. the beats comes in nicely too, though i don't like the sounds used very much (that sortof distorted reverb). then i would've expected more variation. the mood's pretty nice, delicate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ten fingers ten toes Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 I liked the synths alot better than the drums, which I felt just kind of sat there feeling very out of palce. The drum set used feels very generic. The synth lines used were very fun and I felt like a track without the beat elements of just that sort of thing would be much better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest zzz Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 i like this track. on my 3rd listen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest locum76 Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 thanks for the feedback folks. regards the drums - i spent a long time trying to figure out what i wanted to do with them and your comments make sense to me. i might reprise them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erichodge Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 nice start... bass and synth sound great... when the drums kicked in, i thought it might turn into a real liquid d&b track... but it didn't... and, after listening, i do wish it was more of a breakbeat... more percussive elements, more hits, more variation. the quieter snare is overused and ends up distracting me.... also, the synth melody needs a more clear evolution in my mind. maybe some trips up and down a higher range of the scale, maybe let the pad go to sleep a bit more, like you do at the end, and then adding another melodic element. good ideas in this track! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted November 5, 2007 Share Posted November 5, 2007 i couldn't really bring myself to listen all through it's just not my type of sound Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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