skotosa Posted August 31, 2010 Share Posted August 31, 2010 http://soundcloud.com/gerfeso/parallel-drops Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atop Posted August 31, 2010 Share Posted August 31, 2010 I really like the melody and all of its components... Maybe you should bring the drum part in sooner and a few more different percussive sounds.... The melody lines build up to a nice full arrangement but I think some of them can be stripped away for a measure or two, to make the track feel like it is changing more than it does... It might not need the drum part at all... End the track with a more definite ending... Otherwise I think it is a very nice piece of music.... great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skotosa Posted August 31, 2010 Author Share Posted August 31, 2010 I really like the melody and all of its components... Maybe you should bring the drum part in sooner and a few more different percussive sounds.... The melody lines build up to a nice full arrangement but I think some of them can be stripped away for a measure or two, to make the track feel like it is changing more than it does... It might not need the drum part at all... End the track with a more definite ending... Otherwise I think it is a very nice piece of music.... great work! Thanks man! I'll make another version after school. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chassis Posted August 31, 2010 Share Posted August 31, 2010 It ended when it started to get really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skotosa Posted August 31, 2010 Author Share Posted August 31, 2010 It ended when it started to get really good. Well I just made a version which continues it from where it left off. But idk if Atop will be happy with the changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skotosa Posted August 31, 2010 Author Share Posted August 31, 2010 Ok Please check out the extended version :) http://soundcloud.com/gerfeso/parallel-drops-extended Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atop Posted September 1, 2010 Share Posted September 1, 2010 I like it a little more but I almost feel like the full drum part should come in first and sooner and then dwindle down to the kick drum, and then fade out the middle ambience with no second drum part, making the track a little shorter than this version, but that is just me....if you are happy with this version then by all means, keep it the way it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skotosa Posted September 1, 2010 Author Share Posted September 1, 2010 I like it a little more but I almost feel like the full drum part should come in first and sooner and then dwindle down to the kick drum, and then fade out the middle ambience with no second drum part, making the track a little shorter than this version, but that is just me....if you are happy with this version then by all means, keep it the way it is Yeah I was really tired just woke up. At some point I'll do that lol. Thanks again Atop :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht tne Posted September 1, 2010 Share Posted September 1, 2010 i certainly agree that the drums should come in sooner... the twinkly melody is a little weak to carry on for over a minute Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atop Posted September 1, 2010 Share Posted September 1, 2010 I like it a little more but I almost feel like the full drum part should come in first and sooner and then dwindle down to the kick drum, and then fade out the middle ambience with no second drum part, making the track a little shorter than this version, but that is just me....if you are happy with this version then by all means, keep it the way it is Yeah I was really tired just woke up. At some point I'll do that lol. Thanks again Atop :D You're very welcome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skotosa Posted September 1, 2010 Author Share Posted September 1, 2010 Final. Percussion enters sooner. Less repetitive. More refined ending. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atop Posted September 1, 2010 Share Posted September 1, 2010 Sounds a lot better man! Hope you are happy with it. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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