Guest blag Posted November 9, 2010 Share Posted November 9, 2010 http://soundcloud.com/willman852/unfinished-ravey-track Impressions? Criticisms? Ideas as to where I can take it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest blag Posted November 9, 2010 Share Posted November 9, 2010 This is in the wrong forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gritbox Posted November 10, 2010 Share Posted November 10, 2010 too much high pitched stuff that goes on for too long. I think that synth lead that sort of sounds like a drowned out orch hit should go run through a low pass filter. I like the bassy bits and drums. The drums could use a little compression to make them more distinct too imo. I like how playful it sounds though and that its not completely predictable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryancolecreate Posted November 11, 2010 Share Posted November 11, 2010 the beat and the bass line is nice, but the melody totally loses me. There's not really any kind of aesthetic or pattern making it cohesive. I think the phrasing and structure can also use some work. The sounds and atmosphere is fine. The mix is not the major issue to be paying attention to. Also what is the break you've chopped here? I've been looking for that one. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest blag Posted November 11, 2010 Share Posted November 11, 2010 the beat and the bass line is nice, but the melody totally loses me. There's not really any kind of aesthetic or pattern making it cohesive. I think the phrasing and structure can also use some work. The sounds and atmosphere is fine. The mix is not the major issue to be paying attention to. Also what is the break you've chopped here? I've been looking for that one. :) Appreciating the comments :) I guess that I wanted a playful/jageddy melody, and that it started to sound cohesive enough to me after I've been listening to it for so long! I'm crap at that structure - something I really need to improve on but I don't know how. It just doesn't came naturally to me. I'm normally much more in intersted in textures. I got the break from here: http://www.zenhiser.com/products/Pure-Oldskool-Hardcore-Drum-Loops-04.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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