machinemask Posted July 18, 2011 Share Posted July 18, 2011 http://soundcloud.com/mopfunk/3-atm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
machinemask Posted July 19, 2011 Author Share Posted July 19, 2011 work in prog, need some advice/crit! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ansgaria Posted July 19, 2011 Share Posted July 19, 2011 I like the combination of the floaty, atmospheric pads and acid-esque elements. Nice job. It could perhaps use a bit more variation, especially on the bassline. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
machinemask Posted July 19, 2011 Author Share Posted July 19, 2011 the minimal structure works, but wouldn't mind more variation. yeah i def agree, that's in the works, more variation. thanks for checking it out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
machinemask Posted July 19, 2011 Author Share Posted July 19, 2011 I like the combination of the floaty, atmospheric pads and acid-esque elements. Nice job. It could perhaps use a bit more variation, especially on the bassline. cool cool, thanks! yeah this is a rough mix, i was thinking of either key change or something unexpected...i'll see what comes up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hardcode Posted July 19, 2011 Share Posted July 19, 2011 i thought it sounded fine. you could add more variation but then you run the risk of sounding like youre trying too hard. it was a nice chill track and i think the lack of variation actually supported that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
machinemask Posted July 19, 2011 Author Share Posted July 19, 2011 i thought it sounded fine. you could add more variation but then you run the risk of sounding like youre trying too hard. it was a nice chill track and i think the lack of variation actually supported that i will keep that in mind .... thanks for listening! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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