Jump to content

Recommended Posts

Posted

Nice idea's, I like the slow, melancholy chords in this and the build up too. I thought at first the bass drum was slightly too overdriven but it's actually fine, probably just my ear fatigue today. The additional melodies that come in are pretty lush and I enjoyed the way the beats developed. Any suggestions might include: the initial pad at the very start sounds a wee bit generic or bare. I thought the filtered bass line near the end (around 2.40) could be deeper and wide to give it even more atmosphere. Other than that, I thought I enjoyed it!! The mix sounds pretty good at this stage.

Posted (edited)

ye I will round these off and put them on ye olde bandcamp.

Edited by a missing sense
Posted

nice, I enjoyed this. Agree with the above comments. I would also add in the subtle syncopated hats when the beat drops, and remove them later instead of the way it is now.

 

The FM bass at the end sounds better through the verb, I would leave it that way all the way through.

 

I'm only getting specific because I liked it . . plz post any improvements you make!

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now
  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    • No registered users viewing this page.
×
×
  • Create New...

Important Information

We have placed cookies on your device to help make this website better. You can adjust your cookie settings, otherwise we'll assume you're okay to continue.