granty Posted November 14, 2013 Share Posted November 14, 2013 https://soundcloud.com/lo_five/i-can-help-you Any feedback appreciated folks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MadameChaos Posted November 14, 2013 Share Posted November 14, 2013 really nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted November 14, 2013 Author Share Posted November 14, 2013 Thanks MC ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gmanyo Posted November 14, 2013 Share Posted November 14, 2013 Really dig that ambient, low-key, chill feel of this track. Especially the very first part. Reminds me of driving through a city at night. I wasn't as sure about 1:25-2:00 though, that main punchy synth seems a bit too heavy somehow. Also, the drums get repetitive. But really cool aesthetic here. Very relaxing tune. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted November 15, 2013 Share Posted November 15, 2013 cool song. Id verb those claps and make the kick deeper. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted November 15, 2013 Author Share Posted November 15, 2013 Yep, with you on all these points... The breaks need tidying up, and I think it needs a key change or some more adventurous chords too now, feels a bit too safe. Thanks for the useful feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted November 15, 2013 Author Share Posted November 15, 2013 Changed a few bits and remixed it - sounds more chilled now and less fussy now: https://soundcloud.com/lo_five/i-can-help-you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gmanyo Posted November 15, 2013 Share Posted November 15, 2013 Definitely digging the part more that I didn't like as much on the last one. Especially around 1:43 when the other synth part comes in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted November 15, 2013 Share Posted November 15, 2013 ah yeah this rocks, great improvements! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted November 16, 2013 Author Share Posted November 16, 2013 Thanks fellas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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