hokum Posted November 25, 2013 Share Posted November 25, 2013 Just the first run for this one. There's not much structure yet but once i listened for a while and forgot that it was playing .... Felt like id be a fun post for feedbacks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest lwpss Posted November 25, 2013 Share Posted November 25, 2013 Those slightly detuned pads are absolutely lovely. Bitcrushed beats are nice as well. Good job :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hokum Posted November 25, 2013 Author Share Posted November 25, 2013 Thanks lowpass. Since the post ive added a bit of new pads and a relaxed intro... should be a fun one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hokum Posted November 25, 2013 Author Share Posted November 25, 2013 Now that ive heard it in the car... the bass hits are too heavy and some of the sampled percussion is out of time more than a few hairs of acceptable groove. ... hmm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leon Sumbitches Posted December 2, 2013 Share Posted December 2, 2013 ^ That's just creator's perfectionism hehe, I reckon it sounds fine, didn't even notice any out-of-timeness and the hits seem fine, although in fairness I'm listening on shitty headphones. Really nice track though man, genuinely sounds like it could be a lost AFX number. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hokum Posted January 4, 2014 Author Share Posted January 4, 2014 ^ That's just creator's perfectionism hehe, I reckon it sounds fine, didn't even notice any out-of-timeness and the hits seem fine, although in fairness I'm listening on shitty headphones. Really nice track though man, genuinely sounds like it could be a lost AFX number. quite heavy praise... thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hermann Posted January 4, 2014 Share Posted January 4, 2014 He may have a point about creator´s perfectionist criticism. What may sound out of time for you (and what may in fact be), since you can see the whole "score" so to speak, could be what sets the groove perfectly for another listener. Not that I´m saying it is that way in this case, just thought I´d give you a heads up about the traps one call lay for oneself as a musician. I´ve been subject to it myself is why I´m telling you this, so I advise just trying not to focus on each aspect individually too much until you lose sign of the whole picture. Nice track by the way, love the contrast of the really fast paced clicky percussions to the overall laid back beat underneath it. And yeah, the bitcrushed percussions in the middle are nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cruising for burgers Posted January 9, 2014 Share Posted January 9, 2014 lovely song, missing some strong bass notes imo, that is all. oh and yes, nothing is out of time from this perspective... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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