Guest Max Posted May 22, 2006 Share Posted May 22, 2006 nothing left here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
plastic Posted May 22, 2006 Share Posted May 22, 2006 I SAID NO PIANO MADNESS PLEASE!!!!!!!?!??! A little slow to get going, but when it does (get going) it's gets to be pretty bangin. are you using breaks, max? that would be the craziness there. I think I have to agree with the 'no piano madness" though.. when it starts poking through the mix around halfway through (I guess). It's good.. but something's a little off. I think if you worked on the velocity on the piano a bit it would seems oh so much more believable. I love the beat, the backing chords do get a little tedious, but near the end they drop out and the piano is left to its own devices pretty much (this is a good thing). The piano is more believable here, but still a little dry and stilted feeling. Ends a little abruptly. I liked most of the tonework on here, and the drums. The track was good overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Max Posted May 22, 2006 Share Posted May 22, 2006 i have to admit, that i'm still experiencing on this sector. its a rough scheme still. i'm also not yet confident with the change to the mid part and i want to set the late bass earlier into focus. the end is rushed, while the intro takes too long. the idea is there, i like the piano-string combination to the drums very much, thats why i'm looking for some advice where to move it first. so thanks for the comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Promo Posted May 27, 2006 Share Posted May 27, 2006 Yeah music was discordant/off key for sure. I liked the beats a lot but those orchestral strings just don't sound right. The piano sounds a bit amateurish too to be honest. I'm hearing too much jarring in this track which is kinda irritating. I like the beat quite a lot but the rest of its hard to be positive about as it does sound so badly off key. Sorry Max. I do like the idea of it. Ooo quite like that synthesized sound a fuk load that comes in a bit late. Bassline could be a lot stronger I feel as it sounds a bit wimpy. Yeah once you correct some of the fundamental notes this track would definitely be my bag. Just too much jarring. Its funny I've got a similar sort of track that I'm working on my pc. Like the beats a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Max Posted May 27, 2006 Share Posted May 27, 2006 thank you for the honesty! fair play well done. yes, the piano will get some work. chloroplastic has said all about it, what i want to change over there. but - like you say - i like the idea myself, so this one will appear in another version somewhen - possibly not so soon, because i have like thousand things going, and next one is my CD and after that i want to do 2 ideas with a topic i have, plus a remix. but this track will appear again, with a lot more velocity, not only on the piano. the dynamic is somewhat shitty here. thank you :-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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