Dpek Posted April 2, 2015 Share Posted April 2, 2015 Alright, so I tried rapping :) I really don't know if I pulled it off Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/26673322/Bubbles.mp3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mat Posted April 2, 2015 Share Posted April 2, 2015 The rapping feels a little too aggressive to me, like you're not really "riding" the beat so much, but this kind of rap is not my thing so I'm not your target as far as that goes. I like the track you're rapping over. nice and mellow. has a nice mix of organic and synth/electronic sounds. I like the ending in there alot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest complicatedNoisDRGN Posted April 3, 2015 Share Posted April 3, 2015 The organic sounds which were like strings were best on this song. The rap and the other parts of the song don't hold together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dpek Posted April 6, 2015 Author Share Posted April 6, 2015 alright, thanks guys, will have in mind your comments when I'm advancing on this track :) I hear a lot of potential in it but I'm aware it needs work yeah. maybe today :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dpek Posted April 8, 2015 Author Share Posted April 8, 2015 First link doesn't work anymore, here's the new one - and I used some of your suggestions, Chartreuse, thanks! I think this works much better now Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/26673322/Friendzone.mp3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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