robotrobot Posted February 5, 2008 Share Posted February 5, 2008 Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag http://adamsigmund.googlepages.com/Origami...ika-CarWash.mp3 For this track I used some chippy synth for the leads and recorded in some harmonia and a tad of guitar. While I realize that the amen break is too cliche by many people, I'm still learning how to use it so any critism, tips or comments would be appreciated :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted February 6, 2008 Share Posted February 6, 2008 first of all i liked the track, but i thought the amen was a bit dry, could've used more effects on it also maybe cast some contrast by interjecting sections guided by different breaks than the amen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest six hundred n Posted February 6, 2008 Share Posted February 6, 2008 yes, i enjoyed it too, i have no tehnical advice though, sorry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephyr_Nova Posted February 7, 2008 Share Posted February 7, 2008 I like this quite a bit. The melodies are quite nice, very uplifting --it doesn't get much happier than this. I think more variation in the drum/synth programming towards the end would spice things up and prevent it from getting too repetitive. It sounds like it just needs a few finishing touches, but it's most of the way there. My main suggestion would be to get more creative with the second half. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robotrobot Posted February 7, 2008 Author Share Posted February 7, 2008 Awesome! Thanks for listening and offering your helpful suggestions, people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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