Guest elliot Posted June 1, 2008 Share Posted June 1, 2008 So ive been toying around for about 3 weeks and uhh heres one track i think came out pretty good(althought still unfinished,)also for some reason the persscuive parts are oddy compressed but meh ..feedback and or suggestions appericated!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest chunky Posted June 1, 2008 Share Posted June 1, 2008 5 electronic music's out of 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest hellomynameis Posted June 1, 2008 Share Posted June 1, 2008 there is this odd air wooshing ambient noise, I dont think it really fits in with the track because its like there are two seperate levels you know as in you have like this vast desert with ambience and then suddenly percussion etc. i would suggest also adding more variation and decide what direction you want to go i.e. electronic music or Ambient or whatever sub genre or I suppose you could combine all in one somehow, who knows. Oh and not bad for first guess, but I wouldnt put it in '5 out of 5 IDMS' more like 3 out of 5 imabeginnermakinganewtrack format lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest chunky Posted June 1, 2008 Share Posted June 1, 2008 ok i change my rating 3 electronic music's out of 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest hellomynameis Posted June 1, 2008 Share Posted June 1, 2008 howabout 69 idms out of 69 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tyranthraxus Posted June 1, 2008 Share Posted June 1, 2008 this reminds me of opiate and other stuff on hubble. its straight forward, solid and consistantly interesting... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Scrambled Ears Posted June 1, 2008 Share Posted June 1, 2008 i dug this track. keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted June 1, 2008 Share Posted June 1, 2008 i wasn't feeling it so much it wasn't unique or progressive but it is good for a beginner's track Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beneboi Posted June 1, 2008 Share Posted June 1, 2008 fuck the haters, i put this on as i washed dishes and was very pleasantly surprised. only thing i would say is that i would love to hear some big breaks over it or atleast a solid bd and snare Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest elliot Posted June 2, 2008 Share Posted June 2, 2008 wow thanks guys..ill do some tweaking :laughing: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
qnio Posted June 2, 2008 Share Posted June 2, 2008 good! nice melodies; synth patches. bit monotonous though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goffer Posted June 2, 2008 Share Posted June 2, 2008 i like it... agree with bene in that the snare and bd need a larger footprint over the eerie sound scape. you just need to remix it a bit the levels seem a bit strange at parts, like that second synth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yanG Posted June 3, 2008 Share Posted June 3, 2008 starts absolute great, don't like the melody much, i find it loud in the mix for what it is. when the beat comes back in @ 3:45 there should be something new imo. maybe a louder kick without distortion, faster beat, i have the impression i'm listening to the beginning again (mind you i'm not into repetitive music). hope the criticism is constructive and meaningful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest CNOT Posted June 6, 2008 Share Posted June 6, 2008 not too bad its been awhile since i heard some glitch/ambient noise chill out bro i think we were just running on different wavelengths for a second there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hardcode Posted June 6, 2008 Share Posted June 6, 2008 i liked the trumpet lead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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