Guest Sprigg Posted March 19, 2010 Share Posted March 19, 2010 My newest creation, the first I can honestly say I am completely satisfied with. Comments/ suggestions/ criticism please? http://soundcloud.com/metaphysical-endeavour Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chassis Posted March 19, 2010 Share Posted March 19, 2010 I had to lol at the sample, it was pretty funny. Other than that the end might need some work. But it is a nice track. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Sprigg Posted March 19, 2010 Share Posted March 19, 2010 Yeah I had a really hard time figuring out where it could go or where i wanted it to go for the last bit... and that sample was allllllll me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cryptowen Posted March 20, 2010 Share Posted March 20, 2010 I thought the woodpecker kick drum didn't really fit. I like the synth that comes in after the sample, but I agree, the ending could use work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Sprigg Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 Thanks for the input man, much appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest hahathhat Posted March 21, 2010 Share Posted March 21, 2010 kick is too loud -- not necessarily wrong might benefit from some dignified compression edit: p.s. dig the streganona house avatar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Sprigg Posted March 22, 2010 Share Posted March 22, 2010 Haha, the loud kick was indeed intended to be loud, though I was thinking of maybe replacing it with something that has a bit more boom and a little less click. And thanks for the avatar props, mate. Wish I could say I made it. Found it on a friend's hard drive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest bigs Posted March 22, 2010 Share Posted March 22, 2010 i think the sample could use some reverb or something to make it sound less like you were hunched over your laptop talking! it goes from a really kind of dreamy alien landscape to the super dry sample with no warning! other than that, quite like the song! oh, and write a proper lead out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Sprigg Posted March 22, 2010 Share Posted March 22, 2010 *facepalm* yeah I need to save a bit o cash so I can get a decent mic, I have this shit Logitech headset that I use as both headphones and my sorry excuse for a mic. I'll try some reverb and maybe other effects and see what I can come up with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ian Posted March 24, 2010 Share Posted March 24, 2010 Real sweet ambient to that synth that comes in about 1 min, nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Fishtank Posted March 27, 2010 Share Posted March 27, 2010 pretty good, I think the kick could use less treble, make it more of a woof sound and yes, the synth that comes in around 1:11 is great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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