Guest beeb21 Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag http://dl.dropbox.com/u/24905278/space%20acid2999997.wav Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag http://dl.dropbox.com/u/24905278/New87286.wav sorry, i started to hate soundcloud Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest beeb21 Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 man! i couldn't find a decent music streaming host all night. so here are the soundcloud links: http://soundcloud.com/amon-shiffrin/space-acid2999997 http://soundcloud.com/amon-shiffrin/new87286 the second song has been uploaded before. this is a new (and mastered) version. hope you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 The drums need a hell of a boost in the two track you posted. You can barely hear them. I would also work on the the build up if I was you. Right now you can't really tell when they peak. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest beeb21 Posted April 17, 2011 Share Posted April 17, 2011 Barely? Are you exaggerating? cause i can hear them alright. anyway, the drums are basically a noise background. they consist of bit-reduced drum samples and distorted kitchen noises. since there's a shitload of melodies in the room, i wanted to keep the drums in the background. i thought of a hihat line from reunion 2 when i didn't bother to build up the drums. thanks for listening and your opinion! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sheatheman Posted April 18, 2011 Share Posted April 18, 2011 i agree that the drums need to be up a bit, or mixed differently. basically they just need to be part of the mix more. i tend to put a filter on the master track so everything is nice and bundled. also, the song basically just stays on the 1, I never feel another chord underneath. it's a nice track though, playful. the first track is really nice. at 2:20 that bit crunched vocal sample sounds really cool and watery. i agree that the drums need to be up a bit, or mixed differently. basically they just need to be part of the mix more. i tend to put a filter on the master track so everything is nice and bundled. also, the song basically just stays on the 1, I never feel another chord underneath. it's a nice track though, playful. the first track is really nice. at 2:20 that bit crunched vocal sample sounds really cool and watery. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DerWaschbar Posted April 19, 2011 Share Posted April 19, 2011 I agree that a second chord would sound good in the first track for a bit of a moody variation, maybe around that 1:12 breakdown spot. The synth work sounds great, nice classic braindance glitchy mono, reminds me of Clark a bit. I also agree that the drum levels in the second track could use a bit of a boost. Overall great stuff, keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest beeb21 Posted April 19, 2011 Share Posted April 19, 2011 Thanks a lot for lookin into this guys! Will definitely keep that in mind when i write the next tunes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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