Guest dunharvestskreech Posted November 17, 2012 Share Posted November 17, 2012 http://soundcloud.com/phylazen/drown-in-blood-chopped-corpse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaffa Posted November 17, 2012 Share Posted November 17, 2012 goes from disconcerting to glatial detroit space chords effectively, thought the main bass kick was abit too pronounced, other than that, decent track Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dunharvestskreech Posted November 17, 2012 Share Posted November 17, 2012 http://soundcloud.com/phylazen/parking-lots i took out that obnoxious intro! yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yikes Posted November 17, 2012 Share Posted November 17, 2012 percussion has way too much treble and is hurting my ears the intro was too long and i fast forwarded to the beat this track is lacking cohesive focus and direction when you shift tempos 3-4 times /speeding up/slowing down with nothing really chaining any of it together the time flux comes off as a novelty instead of a cool effect. sorry i don't mean to rain piss on your track but i wasn't feeling it it seems like you are just fucking off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luke viia Posted November 17, 2012 Share Posted November 17, 2012 agreed w/ yikes' last line there, this sounds like a roadie doing a sound check on a drum machine or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dunharvestskreech Posted November 17, 2012 Share Posted November 17, 2012 sorry about your ears but i like the preciseness and shredding those drums do i also wouldn't worry about its cohesiveness these aren't being used for any ep i'm just toying with different settings so it's practically pointless to even bother with a definite song structure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest isaki Posted November 18, 2012 Share Posted November 18, 2012 i'm not a fan of the pad therefore i'm not too fond of the intro - i'd trim the whole track up a bit and focus on 1:42, cos that part is pretty cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sweepstakes Posted November 18, 2012 Share Posted November 18, 2012 Pads are cool from 2:10 on. Not really feeling anything else about the track, especially the drums. I don't know why you even bothered putting those drums in. Replace them with some pitched-down disco/porno vocals and you might have something cool here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dunharvestskreech Posted November 18, 2012 Share Posted November 18, 2012 i'm not a fan of the pad therefore i'm not too fond of the intro - i'd trim the whole track up a bit and focus on 1:42, cos that part is pretty cool! idk for some reason i thought that was the goofiest/coolest thing i've ever written Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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