Guest thisket Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 I would love it if you gave me your opinion on a song I made called Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag Dramm. In fact, any replies to this post would be OBLITERATING. I mashed many buttons to make this. Thanks as always to Sir Sisforawesome for letting me use his precious interwebspace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest L13 Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 ok first of all i don't like the title[if you have ever been close to death or real bad pain u wouldn't joke like that -preachy preachy] then not to be a kunt but here is my honest unedited opinion it sounds as though it was done in FL or reason in one sitting the main 303 acid melodies are not hook ish or catchy/memorable the drums stay the same thru the whole track-no change in pitch/timbre/dynamics nor are there any fills or layers or buildups/breakdowns at this point in time[2006]to use an 808 and a 303 /"acid" sounds in of itself is well beyond cliche if confined to said tools one must really examine melody and harmony to get any kind of musical payback these sounds are well over used so you need to be extra careful when approaching these musical tropes the pads at the end brighten things up a bit but sadly this reminds me of backround music to a late 80s early 90s california porn video that is not even worth watching cause the "actresses" are too skinny/ugly and don't give good head Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest thisket Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 Hmm... well I couldn't think of a post title. Sorry that it bothered you so much... It was all done on analogue equipment. I didn't use any 808 or 303 noises, just a 909 kit and a synthesizer (along with another synthesizer and an effects box). Thanks for the feedback... I'm sorry that you hated it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
foresense Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 sounds like you had fun making this. i think it's way too long though.. just keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaosmachine Posted May 10, 2006 Share Posted May 10, 2006 reminds me a lot of my early days with rebirth and an amd k6-200. the opening effects sound just like the pcf filter.. interesting that you did it on analog equipment. i like the melodies, you picked good notes :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest thisket Posted May 11, 2006 Share Posted May 11, 2006 Thanks. Might it be salvageable if I shortened it and added something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goffer Posted May 11, 2006 Share Posted May 11, 2006 decent track, though could be better if you remapped it out and put some other elements in there, it gets a bit repeatitive and takes too long to change; it doesnt change until the last minute or so of the track. i say it's very worthy of remodeling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YEK Posted May 11, 2006 Share Posted May 11, 2006 this is like minimal techno right? minimal techno works if it has energy to it all this track might need is just an increase of bpm give that a shot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Champagne Charlie Posted May 11, 2006 Share Posted May 11, 2006 needs a bit more color, and more darkness sprinkled all over for my taste. trying putting your snare through it's own channel so it's not swamped by the kick some atmospherics in there could help liven it up a bit too snare Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theocide Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 Sadly, this track falls short somewhere between totally boring and totally gay. I could have sworn someone else, perhaps multiple people, posted this exact track here. If you want to make it sound better, you'll need to work harder at making music in general. Just because you spent god knows how much money acquiring analogue equipment doesn't mean you're capable of producing anything but a rudimentary demo of box's capabilities. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest thisket Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 Well, it's not my best song. I put it on here because I often can't tell if something I make is good. This one wasn't! So there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goffer Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 It has potential to be good you just need to drill a hole into your head then lay hole-down on the track and let your grey matter leak all over it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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