guidewire Posted October 10, 2013 Share Posted October 10, 2013 https://soundcloud.com/guidewire/smurtle I can't stop listening to this track. I think it's got a good flow to it, but I would love some criticism so that I could maybe tighten it up a little bit. It feels a little like a cover band Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hanz tisch Posted October 10, 2013 Share Posted October 10, 2013 hi, its nice, i would only do something with the main midrange synth...it needs more depth...maybe little bit reverb or chorus on it would do it.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guidewire Posted October 10, 2013 Author Share Posted October 10, 2013 ya... it is a little dry bring a few elements back would be a good idea ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Friendly Foil Posted October 16, 2013 Share Posted October 16, 2013 What hanz said up there. Also, I think the snare or clap or whatever it is could maybe benefit from a shorter attack. A bit more snappy maybe. Melodies are pretty fun and so are the synths, though I think the main synth placed a bit weird in the mix. Also, as hanz said, a chorus effect or some more reverb would be good to create some space. But it's still pretty nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.