acid1 Posted March 2, 2014 Share Posted March 2, 2014 Here is a song I made with close friend/vocalist. We actually wrote a whole album of material last month, but some of the songs need some tweakage. Lemme know what you think, its been a while. [sc5]137307290[/sc5] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doomczar Posted March 2, 2014 Share Posted March 2, 2014 I like the vocal melodies, great moody song! That chord/pad that kicks in at around 1:39 could use a bit of EQ/toning down/sidechaining around the drums in my opinion. It's drowning out that arpeggio key melody and making the drums much less clear. Banging track though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hybernation Posted March 3, 2014 Share Posted March 3, 2014 nice stuff well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
array56 Posted March 5, 2014 Share Posted March 5, 2014 This is great, the keyboard melody is nice but a bit lost in the mix as already mentioned here, you could try pulling that up a little in the mix. Nice vocal, and really nice harmonies around 2.10 btw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thiefinger Posted March 5, 2014 Share Posted March 5, 2014 Nice! Something by Massive Attack came to mind. She has a good voice. Maybe you should concentrate to make the vocals sound like a million bucks. They're the center of attention here so definitely build around them. Nothing wrong with it now but just to make it even better. Try compressing a bit more, saturation, stereo effects, delays... whatever could be good. But yeah very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acid1 Posted March 7, 2014 Author Share Posted March 7, 2014 Yeah I agree, the melody got a little lost in the mix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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