Siegecow Posted February 15, 2007 Share Posted February 15, 2007 I think this may be my best release to date. Not to sound vain but i think the main riff is ridiculously catchy However I'm a bit iffy on the transitions/composition Your thoughts are appreciated :braindance: :braindance: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beneboi Posted February 15, 2007 Share Posted February 15, 2007 This might be listenable if that horrid phaser/filter werent on the main drum line at the beginning. Not sure what main line is supposed to be catchy, I don't hear anything but some noodling on a synth. I like what you did with the vox at the end. Doesn't feel complete or like its trying to convey anything. Maybe its time for a QC dept in YLC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Siegecow Posted February 16, 2007 Author Share Posted February 16, 2007 This might be listenable if that horrid phaser/filter werent on the main drum line at the beginning. Not sure what main line is supposed to be catchy, I don't hear anything but some noodling on a synth. I like what you did with the vox at the end. Doesn't feel complete or like its trying to convey anything. Maybe its time for a QC dept in YLC. What exactly is wrong with the filter? Just sounds bad to you? And the main riff starts when the beat comes out of the filter. It's probably not as catchy to you guys as it is to me. It aint complete really which is why i posted it cuz i was out of ideas was hoping maybe you guys might have some. And QC? what is that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest drei Posted February 16, 2007 Share Posted February 16, 2007 dont like so much the piano voice, like the chords, but not the timbre, maybe more soft or something. like it a lot from 2.37 till the end. : ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beneboi Posted February 16, 2007 Share Posted February 16, 2007 Quality control. I was referring to the fact that they were completely wet, the whole time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dale Posted February 17, 2007 Share Posted February 17, 2007 i think this is an excellent track. im not one to point out minor problems etc, i just like to give an "overall" opinion. very well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest feta lol Posted February 17, 2007 Share Posted February 17, 2007 i thought it was alraight. the main synth that comes in about half way sounds to housey for me, though. also when you are running those filters you gotta get some compression in there because they top out a liittle high sometimes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Emptyhandz Posted February 17, 2007 Share Posted February 17, 2007 Too much hate for this track.. i think its ace. Don't like some of the voices, but well-written & put together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted March 7, 2007 Share Posted March 7, 2007 this is a really good track i think its help ed out by its description as illbient trip- hop and its title they kinda get at what it actually sounds like. i think you hit the nail on the head bringing that beat in a round 2:15 this would lend itself really cleverly to ragga jungle remixes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Siegecow Posted March 8, 2007 Author Share Posted March 8, 2007 Thanks for all the feedback fellas! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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