Guest tht! tne Posted August 29, 2007 Share Posted August 29, 2007 here are two more simplistic beginners tracks made in renoise punch_monday_4.mp3 kick_tuesday_3.mp3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yan_g Posted August 30, 2007 Share Posted August 30, 2007 like punch better, deserves development imo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted August 30, 2007 Share Posted August 30, 2007 funny, i liked kick better there are some parts that really need improvement in these, i think i just whipped 'em up to a passable point imo and threw 'em up for opinions i probably won't really develop these per se; i'll just reuse passages and put them in new tracks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest apy Posted August 30, 2007 Share Posted August 30, 2007 I like the beats in kick Tuesday 3 and also how it's proudly electronic, can hear a gaming music influence in these which is never bad.I realise they are sketches but that gave them an innocent appeal, not overworked or what you've heard a thousand times before. Keep at it. : ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m.leafeater.dl Posted August 30, 2007 Share Posted August 30, 2007 I liked the melody in punch, wasn't feeling the beats though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted August 31, 2007 Share Posted August 31, 2007 thanks for the comments please don't be reticent to out-and-out tell me i suck i'm here to learn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beneboi Posted August 31, 2007 Share Posted August 31, 2007 listening to kicktuesday, personally i would remove the bass from the drums you have and add a strong kick, and snare type sound. i feel the same way about punch, like the melodies but wish you have some type of stong break or 808 bd over it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ۞ Syntheme ۞ Posted August 31, 2007 Share Posted August 31, 2007 keep up the good work! I enjoyed, particularly kick tues. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Promo Posted August 31, 2007 Share Posted August 31, 2007 Melodies/harmonies are interesting. I agree with Beneboi about adding some beefier beats/breaks to it. Also some of the sounds feel a bit too dry for my tastes. A strong 909 kick in 'kick' would make a good addition to 'Kick'. These tunes feel a bit braindance Ceephaxesque. I'd probably say I prefered 'Punch Monkey'. Overall not bad dude considering these are your first bits of stuff you've put out there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Morgan Posted August 31, 2007 Share Posted August 31, 2007 i like punch alot better, especially the strumming effect you have in the beginning (pianos?). kick is way too loud and in-your-face Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephyr_Nova Posted August 31, 2007 Share Posted August 31, 2007 Checking out punch monday. Not bad at all for first attempts. Renoise isn't exactly a beginner friendly program. The kick/snare could be a lot punchier. The bits with just drums could use some atmospheric textures to fill them out a bit. Continue working with this one (unless you'd rather move on of course... definitely lots of room for embellishment though.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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