Guest tht tne Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 magnificat/version. razor wit oh how you left me down the stairs counting shouting con- necting the dots i always want to paint you and absorb your mercies tender and vibrant like a gauguin simplicity ever abide with my kin allowing all alliterative sex and when would we adventure to resist the slow impulses of a generative and altogether mind-numbing aeon? but i am firm i dream away cities that have never known love or the dark of their nights that remains uninviting to anyone with a heart please lift me up into the light; one time spinning i thought i was meant to remain and further black not redeemed & begging the quest- ions an infinity of good purposes nevertheless aging growing bolder as the sun will sometimes rise in the west i am following the mach- inery of your scintillating force raised up again like unto the sea of fire with the rare noble glory & when i was a child i spake as a child i thought as a child i und- erstood as a child but when i be- came a man... i put away childish things... we have faith together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Sprigg Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 magnificat/version. but i am firm i dream away cities that have never known love or the dark of their nights that remains uninviting to anyone with a heart please lift me up into the light; one time spinning i thought i was meant to remain and further black not redeemed & begging the quest- ions an infinity of good purposes nevertheless aging growing bolder That, and the last stanza, fucking ace, man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest bigs Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 if you'd be up for it, i'd be down to throw down some edits. there's a lot of good stuff but it could use some edits to preserve flow! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vamos scorcho Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 gay just kidding, of course. really very cool. i would like to contribute later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dpek Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 Damn I would love to contribute but I have only slovenian poems :( and you know how stuff gets lost in translation.... Anyway this is some hot shit! I really enjoyed reading it and my interpretation of it is very close to my heart...... Thank you :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cardan Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 this is just one line that popped in my head, i have tons of writings ~~transluscent chair stares at unknowing persons clouded by doubt in a chilly underground train station at 11:42, the time between real sleep and wanting to be asleep~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaffa Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 magnificat/version. but i am firm i dream away cities that have never known love or the dark of their nights that remains uninviting to anyone with a heart please lift me up into the light; one time spinning i thought i was meant to remain and further black not redeemed & begging the quest- ions an infinity of good purposes nevertheless aging growing bolder That, and the last stanza, fucking ace, man. green velvet - preacher man 2.43 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Super lurker ultra V12 Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Sprigg Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 magnificat/version. but i am firm i dream away cities that have never known love or the dark of their nights that remains uninviting to anyone with a heart please lift me up into the light; one time spinning i thought i was meant to remain and further black not redeemed & begging the quest- ions an infinity of good purposes nevertheless aging growing bolder That, and the last stanza, fucking ace, man. green velvet - preacher man 2.43 Holy lol. I got about halfway through and couldn't take anymore... but that's hilarious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Sprigg Posted July 6, 2010 Share Posted July 6, 2010 EDIT: Wtf double post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keltoi Posted July 8, 2010 Share Posted July 8, 2010 you are better at poetry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mikew5th Posted July 8, 2010 Share Posted July 8, 2010 there once was a rapping tomato thats right i said rapping tomato he rapped all day from april to may and also, guess what? it was me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest iamabe Posted July 8, 2010 Share Posted July 8, 2010 the girl in your avatar is smokin' thne tnenet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ricky Downtown Posted July 8, 2010 Share Posted July 8, 2010 roses are red violets are blue hey tht tne: i love you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoodie Posted July 8, 2010 Share Posted July 8, 2010 roses are red violets are blue your lips are sweet may i fuck you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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