chassis Posted July 22, 2010 Share Posted July 22, 2010 I know theres a track in here somewhere but I just cant seem to drag it out. Any suggestions? http://soundcloud.com/anflec/upwards-demo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Scrambled Ears Posted July 22, 2010 Share Posted July 22, 2010 its really nice but there should be more of a climactic build or at least some series of climactic moment. maybe this isnt your thing but i just think its too atmospheric atm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hautlle Posted July 22, 2010 Share Posted July 22, 2010 I would probably tweak that arpy sounding synth out to really get it singing by the end, maybe addd in some reverb on it as it progresses. It's nice, but ya, kinda just a little jam thing right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Enter a new display name Posted July 22, 2010 Share Posted July 22, 2010 I would have LOVED that tune to grow dancier with the growing synths from the first half. Seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chassis Posted July 22, 2010 Author Share Posted July 22, 2010 I would have LOVED that tune to grow dancier with the growing synths from the first half. Seriously. Actually thats not a bad idea. I think I might re-gate the start and have it play a more dominate role. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneaksta303 Posted July 23, 2010 Share Posted July 23, 2010 I back the suggestions given in this thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chassis Posted July 31, 2010 Author Share Posted July 31, 2010 I might have actually made it worse http://soundcloud.com/anflec/upwards-2nd-demo-i-think-i-made-it-worse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht tne Posted July 31, 2010 Share Posted July 31, 2010 I might have actually made it worse http://soundcloud.com/anflec/upwards-2nd-demo-i-think-i-made-it-worse the beat is a bit strict and not fluid, but i really like the arpeggiations and i think you should keep working on this, it could be something special Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chassis Posted July 31, 2010 Author Share Posted July 31, 2010 The kick sounds like a mouse playing the drums. Needs more beef. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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