Guest Mzai Posted February 11, 2011 Share Posted February 11, 2011 Hello everyone! My name is Mzai. And i compose Vocal trip hop music. Enjoy it and share it, comments and critique would be great! Here is my song "Story about girl" http://soundcloud.com/mzai/mzai-story-about-girl Love you all!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terpentintollwut Posted February 11, 2011 Share Posted February 11, 2011 I listened to both your posted tracks, I like them. I can't give you that much feedback regarding the production bit as I've never created anything with vocals or beats myself, but I feel both tracks could do with a little more "intensity" on the instrumental side, not the composition, just the mastering, regarding EQ. At 1:10, when the beat kicks in, it's a tad too soft/liquid sounding for me. Could well be a little harsher on the ear, a little clearer maybe, meaning the mid/high frequencies could come through a little more. I'm listening on relatively cheap (but quite decent) headphones, I don't know how it sounds on a speaker system. Could be difficult not to loose the clarity of the voice when fondling the EQ on the beats. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted February 11, 2011 Share Posted February 11, 2011 (lol, I recognize the sample at the beginning of the track ;) ) Very nice production! It sounds very nice but I was you I would recreate the music-box melody with real music-box samples to get that rustic and raw sounds. The part I like the best is right after the break at 1:55 and that part should be longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mzai Posted February 15, 2011 Share Posted February 15, 2011 Oh, thanks friend for all the feedbacks and critique! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Adam Posted February 15, 2011 Share Posted February 15, 2011 Very nice indeed. Really really nice. Just personally i would like vocals a bit wider. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luke viia Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 This is great. I'm with Squee re: the real music box samples. The album "Golden Morning Breaks" by Colleen has a few really nice s of how good that "rustic and raw" sound can get... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mrajh Posted February 20, 2011 Share Posted February 20, 2011 hey mzai ive enjoyed this thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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