Guest ex-voto Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 dunno about this really :D http://soundcloud.com/ex-voto/sundayjam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest kokeboka Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 I like the beat (especially at 0:27, that's nice), but your bass/lead sounds seem a bit too bright and driven. Are you doing more work on it, or was it an experiment sort of thing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 I love the atmosphere you created in this track ! The first minute has a very grave (solemn? I had to use the dictionary for that ^^) mood. The rhythm sounds kind of hazardous but in the same time all the beats seem to hit where they have to. And the textures they bring are really full, crunchy. I like this very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ex-voto Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 thanks for the listen guys, I might work on it a bit more now. I might add an actual bass layer indeed. I also thought it lacked a bit of lower frequencies, but didnt manage to fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 And do you plan to extend it ? I feel like you could easily do so. pulling more juice out of it ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ex-voto Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 hehe for sure make some crazy arpeggiator say wooha. waiting for the next inspiration burst to show itself ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 Yeah, definitely keep working on this one because it has a bunch of potential. I don't know what synth you've used for the bass but if you're able to apply a glide effect to it then try that. It sounds kinda brutal and very abrupt when the bassline changes notes but if you were to add a glide effect I think it'll end up sounding a bit more dynamic. You will have to tweak it a whole bunch but I think it might work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
springymajig Posted December 13, 2011 Share Posted December 13, 2011 I really like where this is going, awesome drum sounds and atmosphere. I agree that it needs more low end but also, I reckon it needs to sound wider, bigger, more deep and cavernous... some heavy reverb on the synths would help a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest iep Posted December 13, 2011 Share Posted December 13, 2011 those Coil-like FM-organs that come thru half way, man, not bat 'tall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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