Revitute Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 Worked hard on this one, I hope you like it. Please, leave your critics on this track, good or negative. http://soundcloud.com/sergej-sokolov/borealis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SR4 Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 the intro was a bit too drawn out but once the melodies come in, pretty!!!! maybe get some 80s out Slowdive reverb drums floating throughout to increase the "presence" of the track? I like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revitute Posted April 14, 2012 Author Share Posted April 14, 2012 the intro was a bit too drawn out but once the melodies come in, pretty!!!! maybe get some 80s out Slowdive reverb drums floating throughout to increase the "presence" of the track? I like it! Thanks alot! And about the Slowdive drums, I had this jazz like loop in my PC so I edited it and put it there. And about the reverb, it's on all of the instruments, normally there is no reverb on any of those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kinski Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 once it sets after the break around 4th minute thorugh it's really good. you're getting there, champ. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cryptowen Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 Seconding that the build-up might of been too long. Once everything is finally layered on at the end it gets really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revitute Posted April 14, 2012 Author Share Posted April 14, 2012 once it sets after the break around 4th minute thorugh it's really good. you're getting there, champ. I'm trying! :) Thanks! Seconding that the build-up might of been too long. Once everything is finally layered on at the end it gets really good. Yeah, I could have fix some things. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Friendly Foil Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 You're definitely getting better. Keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hermann Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 i don´t agree with the intro being too drawn out, in my opinion I think it works well as an ominous and fluent introduction. Just my opinion ;) And wow when those bottley natural sounds come in, it´s fantastic! Good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revitute Posted April 14, 2012 Author Share Posted April 14, 2012 i don´t agree with the intro being too drawn out, in my opinion I think it works well as an ominous and fluent introduction. Just my opinion ;) And wow when those bottley natural sounds come in, it´s fantastic! Good job You're definitely getting better. Keep at it. THANK YOU ALL!! Didn't expect much good feedbacks! Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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