Guest cult fiction Posted April 24, 2012 Share Posted April 24, 2012 This is a track I was working on for an upcoming album, but I'm not sure it will wind up on it. http://soundcloud.com/faceculler/stone-circle Vocals by my wife. Any mixing ideas or constructive criticism welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GraveGlitcher Posted April 24, 2012 Share Posted April 24, 2012 What a magical summer track you made, great job FC! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cult fiction Posted April 27, 2012 Share Posted April 27, 2012 Thank you sir! The response on soundcloud has made me think it probably belongs on the album. Probably needs a bit more bass... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cear Posted April 28, 2012 Share Posted April 28, 2012 fun track couldve used a bit more nuances though, everything is pretty much in the foreground i feel those squeeky bleep bloop thingys that come in at 0:53 (and become very apparent at 1:00) in for example could be a bit more silent just a bit i think, same with drums at 2:50, etc well im checking the track on low price range sennheiser headphones so u know, maybe it stomps everything hi-midrange a bit more to the front... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theburglar Posted April 28, 2012 Share Posted April 28, 2012 Really nice! Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cult fiction Posted April 30, 2012 Share Posted April 30, 2012 Thanks for the feedback! I agree about stuff being too far in the foreground, I'll play with the mixing a bit more... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hermann Posted May 1, 2012 Share Posted May 1, 2012 It is a very nice and catchy, and very sunny, track, but I feel it doesn´t flow that well for me. It feels a bit too much like they are just different parts put together, I mean I can feel each part seperately and can´t hear it much as a whole piece. If you get what I´m saying. I just feel it´s missing one thing (what it is I´m not sure though) that ties it all together. Other than that nice track ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cult fiction Posted May 3, 2012 Share Posted May 3, 2012 Cheers Hermann, thanks for the feedback. The transition to the darker section makes sense in my head but I can see how it could feel disjointed. I always like having more than one mood or feeling in a track, but sometimes they don't fit snugly enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mrx Posted May 4, 2012 Share Posted May 4, 2012 i agree with what herrman wrote and like this track. I'll have to check out more of tracks on soundcloud someday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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