Deepex Posted December 28, 2012 Share Posted December 28, 2012 Thanks for listening :)https://soundcloud.com/davidpeck/seasonshift Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest active galaxies Posted December 28, 2012 Share Posted December 28, 2012 Good sound design, and some nice lithe percussion that keeps things ticking over. If I was being hyper-critical I'd say that the synth lines seem to cluster around the same notes slightly too much, and the whole thing stays broadly in the same key. Some interesting melodic progression and some deftly-applied key changes could take this in interesting new directions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adieu Posted December 28, 2012 Share Posted December 28, 2012 This is great, but I think you should work on it a little bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
machinemask Posted December 29, 2012 Share Posted December 29, 2012 Really cool track, very relaxing and fun. I think maybe a tad more variation on the bass and it'd be a pretty solid idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deepex Posted December 29, 2012 Author Share Posted December 29, 2012 Thanks for the honest feedback guys, I appreciate it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted December 29, 2012 Share Posted December 29, 2012 honestly, the first 40 secs or so did nothing for me and kinda made me want to turn it off. but im glad i didnt cause once that melody kicked in i was amazed. it really pulled it all together and sounded amazing. awesome track dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yanG Posted December 30, 2012 Share Posted December 30, 2012 Feels great, fantastic bass sound, but it gets too repetitive for me after a while, there is not enough variation in the sounds and moods for my taste. Production sounds very clean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 3, 2013 Share Posted January 3, 2013 I like it, good instrumental. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qatarsis Posted January 6, 2013 Share Posted January 6, 2013 lovely piece of music dude ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest happycase Posted January 7, 2013 Share Posted January 7, 2013 Great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
syd syside Posted January 7, 2013 Share Posted January 7, 2013 Excellent track, loving the melody and rhythm. A+! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deepex Posted January 10, 2013 Author Share Posted January 10, 2013 Hey thanks guys! Glad you're enjoying it. Probably my cleanest production to date. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cryptowen Posted January 10, 2013 Share Posted January 10, 2013 very smoooootttthhhh, like it's in that region where if it got much smoother it'd start sounding like a generic tech demo, but where it's at is good - the sounds still have character. As far as crits go, I'm tempted to echo the sentiment that it's a bit repetitive, but really I'd say it's more like what you've got is a well developed backing track that just needs some sort of really tonally distinct lead laid down on top of it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted January 11, 2013 Share Posted January 11, 2013 Really like this - I think there's plenty of subtle variation in it, the sounds are nice and sharp and clean. Picture the scene: I'm riding a motorcycle along a coastal road at dusk, gaining admiring glances from other motorist for my biking skills. I pull over at a cliffs edge, take my helmet off, turn and look into the camera. I'M A HOT CHICK. Quality tune though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Brian Sweeney Fitzgerald Posted January 12, 2013 Share Posted January 12, 2013 I'm going to go against the grain a bit here and say that I've actually got no problem with the bass repetition, it doesn't necessarily stand out for me anyway. I absolutely love the melody that comes in around the 0:49 mark as well, lovely stuff. For me though I think the production is a tad bit too clean, I'd love to hear some Clark type compression + distortion over this and see the results. I should say though that I do mainly make footwork and hip hop so for me to give production advice regarding cleanliness probably isn't the best of ideas... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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