Guest yikes Posted January 20, 2013 Share Posted January 20, 2013 did some exporting of stems instead of rendering sounds louder i think http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KlfMhfwotHE&feature=youtu.be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
machinemask Posted January 20, 2013 Share Posted January 20, 2013 A little too random/sporadic for my personal tastes, but you have some neat sounds going on at parts. Maybe clean it up, fix the arrangement? I dunno. That sound at 2:20 is too loud I think...weird track, cool stuff. The breaks are interesting. Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Aserinsky Posted January 20, 2013 Share Posted January 20, 2013 Certainly one of the most interesting uses of the amen break here! I quite like the way it's being used as a melodic device, certainly a unique touch. But yeah I have to agree the arrangement does seem to be a bit random, at points it's beginning to sound quite like Steinvord but then doesn't, almost like there's two tracks at the same time almost. There's definitely some cool sound design here, keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yikes Posted January 20, 2013 Share Posted January 20, 2013 thanks guys i am working on a less randomish remix i thought the same thing after living with it for a day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharlesWatkins Posted January 20, 2013 Share Posted January 20, 2013 sounds like your cat walked across the keyboard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yikes Posted January 20, 2013 Share Posted January 20, 2013 sounds like your cat walked across the keyboard i got ten bucks on you being banned sooner than 200 posts mousey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CharlesWatkins Posted January 20, 2013 Share Posted January 20, 2013 i meant in a good way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LimpyLoo Posted January 20, 2013 Share Posted January 20, 2013 sounds like your cat walked across the keyboard i got ten bucks on you being banned sooner than 200 posts mousey twenty says <150. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ambermonk Posted January 21, 2013 Share Posted January 21, 2013 I dig the percussion, though there are a couple of minor things I would have done differently. First, that distorted synth pad that enters two minutes in, I'd bring the volume down at least 66 percent, since it seems to overpower everything else in the track. Second, that sine wave synth that enters at five minutes in, I'd organize into a more recognizable melody. It kind of sounds like random notes, akin to a noise oscillator at a very low frequency. But nice textures overall.Apologies if I sound like a prick. I don't mean to belittle your work in any way. Just thought I'd offer a little bit of constructive criticism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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