sergeantk Posted March 18, 2014 Share Posted March 18, 2014 i don't do this much, but here it goes... i have a very rough WIP of a song I heard in my head today, quite like how it's unfolded so far, but still think it's missing... something... any thoughts/suggestions? https://soundcloud.com/zanderone/wip/s-q0wew (player didnt seem to be working so i added hyperlink) https://soundcloud.com/zanderone/wip/s-q0wew Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Friendly Foil Posted March 18, 2014 Share Posted March 18, 2014 I have a suggestion. The track feels like it never quite get going and I don't mean that in a "where's the drop brah"-way. Maybe add some punchier drums later on or something? A bit like maybe, since you mentioned AFX yourself. ,You said "how it's unfolded so far" in the OP, so I guess this is just the intro for something bigger? I like the synths and melodies though so don't take this as if I hated everything. It's quite good but phatter drums would make it better. But it's still quite good. imho tbh idk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brisbot Posted March 18, 2014 Share Posted March 18, 2014 Like Friendly Foil said, it has an interesting melody, but you definitely need to work on it longer, and flesh out and think about the sounds a bit more, then post it up again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chris Toffer Posted March 18, 2014 Share Posted March 18, 2014 Definitely hear the kettel influence. Keep workin on it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest The Bro Posted March 18, 2014 Share Posted March 18, 2014 Reminded me more of Mrs Jynx I'd say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest brendyman Posted March 18, 2014 Share Posted March 18, 2014 Definitely see where the others are coming from when they say it "doesn't really get going". Punchier drums would definitely do the trick (if you're not sure how to do this, compressors work wonders on percussion). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sergeantk Posted March 19, 2014 Author Share Posted March 19, 2014 Thanks guys, mucho appreciated. I guess I just need to come back to this with fresh ears and add new sections, just don't really know where to go with it yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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