th555 Posted July 16, 2014 Share Posted July 16, 2014 Here's a little track I made https://soundcloud.com/th555/sarputer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brisbot Posted July 16, 2014 Share Posted July 16, 2014 Hmm. It doesn't feel quite done you know? The synth at 1:30 that's arping could use an accompaniment of some sort. I would also try to make some of your elements stand out more in some way. IT doesn't really matter which, but everything feels kind of flat. I'm also not really a fan of the detuning toward the end, it's a bit too over-powering. I think the problem may like in that it's very noisey. If the detuning was softer in some way that might work better. Basically, I would work to make the track feel more dynamic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
th555 Posted July 16, 2014 Author Share Posted July 16, 2014 Thanks for the feedback :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SampleScience Posted July 17, 2014 Share Posted July 17, 2014 Curious track! The overall melody and feel are interesting. The arp is nice, I liked it. But I'm not sure about some of the sounds used. Some of the synth tones are detuned and/or too harsh for the track. I think the track has potential, but it needs more work to be considered finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
th555 Posted July 17, 2014 Author Share Posted July 17, 2014 Thanks :) I guess I should've tunes my synth before recording lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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