QQQ Posted August 8, 2015 Share Posted August 8, 2015 http://soundcloud.com/user645104563/spider-web-that-catches-the-dew-of-morning A pretty minimal little ditty. Thanks for listening. Let me know if you have any thoughts or critique. Sssafeee. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 8, 2015 Share Posted August 8, 2015 nice wonky sounditudes. i like how you managed to create a harmony between the detuned chords. you should continue working on finding tonal harmonies and expand on making these more.. virile? i'd enjoy the outro of the song more if the drum pattern that comes in would be more potent. i see the work in there of making a drum rhythm, but it still sounds a bit 'stale' to me. a bit too squeeky clean, if you know what i mean hope this helps a bit! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QQQ Posted August 9, 2015 Author Share Posted August 9, 2015 Thanks for the feedback dude, appreciate it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
th555 Posted August 9, 2015 Share Posted August 9, 2015 I would say the hihats are too rigid IMO, kinda spoiling the laid-back feeling of the rest of it. Drum programming is very midi/runescape-ish lol, actually I kinda dig that. Chords and pad sounds are lush. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted August 10, 2015 Share Posted August 10, 2015 I would say the hihats are too rigid IMO, kinda spoiling the laid-back feeling of the rest of it. Drum programming is very midi/runescape-ish lol Yeah, I agree with th555 on this part. Also, the drum samples themselves sound really midi-ish. Especially the snare. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QQQ Posted August 10, 2015 Author Share Posted August 10, 2015 The drum samples are thrown on from a cheap drum machine (zoom 234) and unedited. It evolved from a jam I wasn't expecting to go anywhere so they are pretty much unedited I think. Good shout on the hihats th555, they do counter the rest of the drums. Thanks for the comments guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QrQ Posted August 15, 2015 Share Posted August 15, 2015 I would echo the above sentiments. Wonderful woozy pad chords. Drum samples and programming could probably do with a bit of work. They also have a lot of presence in the mix at the mo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QQQ Posted August 15, 2015 Author Share Posted August 15, 2015 Thanks, QrQ. Nice username you have ;) Going to work on getting some tighter drum sounds down and working on the rhythm next time I start a track. Thanks for the feedback guys! Mad appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest brendyman Posted August 15, 2015 Share Posted August 15, 2015 I would also suggest maybe changing up the chords a bit at some point, like having a "B" section or something with a different chord progression, then come back to the "A" section from earlier Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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