MHaley Posted August 16, 2010 Share Posted August 16, 2010 I've been on and off with this song for such a long time, I'm just trying to learn FL Studio..So i was randomly changing the Bass, and melodies, and this is only the demo, so its not 100% and i'm still learning ;) Tell me what you think I should do at the end, like add another synth or keep the Kick and Bass but extra power or whatever =] or http://soundcloud.com/basscreator/demo-song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Friendly Foil Posted August 16, 2010 Share Posted August 16, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Al5x Posted August 16, 2010 Share Posted August 16, 2010 needs glowsticks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hardcode Posted August 16, 2010 Share Posted August 16, 2010 i liked it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
data Posted August 16, 2010 Share Posted August 16, 2010 the bass and the lead just doesn't go well together, can't you hear it? towards the end they're all out of tune, and i doubt this has anything to do with experience, either you hear it or you don't. you should get into this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mfSIcx1YgVE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Sprigg Posted August 16, 2010 Share Posted August 16, 2010 Some nice work there, I like it. That pause in the middle is sudden and jarring and kinda ugly. I'm a big fan of stop-starts, but that just didn't work at all for me. As to the outro, I personally feel it should end at 3:26. That last bit of kick drum with the whoosh at the end was just kinda... meh. It would make a good transition into another track though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hardcode Posted August 16, 2010 Share Posted August 16, 2010 i also liked the timed comments on the youtube one lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest CurlyAngryman Posted August 17, 2010 Share Posted August 17, 2010 Maybe we should slow it down by 800% and see what ambient masterpiece comes out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MHaley Posted August 18, 2010 Author Share Posted August 18, 2010 Thanks for the honest opions =] But sometimes my headset getting really scratchy, so i can't hear the bass and kicks as good. And this was only a demo, I didnt fix any of the mistakes, because I just wanted to uploaded it and head to bed, but I will be working on the real thing soon =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Sprigg Posted August 19, 2010 Share Posted August 19, 2010 Look forward to hearing a finished project, man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MHaley Posted August 22, 2010 Author Share Posted August 22, 2010 Me too haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chim Posted August 22, 2010 Share Posted August 22, 2010 next time don't upload it until you're satisfied with it yourself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soloman Tump Posted August 22, 2010 Share Posted August 22, 2010 Sounds like something DJ Scot Project would have written 10 years ago, such as this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hRSaHLgX8Yc Some of my mates would have loved this sort of thing back in our crasher / gods kitchen days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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