android402 Posted September 11, 2010 Share Posted September 11, 2010 Here's my latest piece I'm working on. It's still a work in process, as some of the transitions are a little rough and parts are repetitive. I also wanna add vocals. Please listen, comment/critique :) http://soundcloud.com/android_402/lungs-fill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ansgaria Posted September 11, 2010 Share Posted September 11, 2010 I like the atmosphere of the track a whole lot. It gets extremely interesting at around 3.20 and towards the end. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yanG Posted September 11, 2010 Share Posted September 11, 2010 agree it's repetitive but glad you plan to fix it. other than that the track's got something. don't ruin it with the vocals! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Adam Posted September 11, 2010 Share Posted September 11, 2010 It's very similar to this at the beginning. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oPFM3DUVT-8 But i really like it, mostly from 0.18 to 1.35 and at 2.20. Just maybe it's too long isn't it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest naos Posted September 12, 2010 Share Posted September 12, 2010 it sounds great. would love to hear it on a bigger sound system. Drums around 1:55 are a bit muddy, but it doesn't bother me. I hoped to hear some heavily distorted acoustic drum sequences, but that was just a metaller in me hungry for some blast beats. Wicked track! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted September 12, 2010 Share Posted September 12, 2010 Very nice production although the strings that come in at 3:20 sound very midi-ish. Also, the break at 3:02 could very well be twice as long just to build up the suspense Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht tne Posted September 12, 2010 Share Posted September 12, 2010 it's a trip it's got a funky beat and i can bug out to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
android402 Posted October 6, 2010 Author Share Posted October 6, 2010 Thanks guys. Here's another piece I've recently finished. More piano driven and softer than the first track. http://soundcloud.com/android_402/piano-dust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luke viia Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 really like both of these, especially piano dust. that was great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YEK Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 ^ i can visualize this as part of a soundtrack for a very dramatic movie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Al5x Posted October 9, 2010 Share Posted October 9, 2010 This is very, very dope. Good everything. A+, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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