foresense Posted March 9, 2012 Share Posted March 9, 2012 http://soundcloud.com/zeitgeber24/skyroads early version of a track Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rev85 Posted March 9, 2012 Share Posted March 9, 2012 Ace melodies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
foresense Posted March 11, 2012 Author Share Posted March 11, 2012 thanks would love to have some more feedback.. not technical per se. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sergeantk Posted March 11, 2012 Share Posted March 11, 2012 Really diggin it, especially how the rhythm of the melody constantly changes. Nice work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
foresense Posted March 11, 2012 Author Share Posted March 11, 2012 cool thanks! yeah still working on the whole thing, maybe add some stuff still. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted March 11, 2012 Share Posted March 11, 2012 Nice! Great melodies and great beat programming. I probably wouldn't have used the Amen Break because your melodies are too delicate to get disrupted by it... but of course, it's a classic beat so I can see why you would use it. Btw. I would probably remove the crash cymbal at 1:14 because for some reason it kinda makes the whole break stumble. I can't really explain why it just stuck out to me. I do like the way you've used the Amen Break after 1:54 though (if this comment seems messy it's because I'm writing it as I'm listening :)). I kinda wish it was longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
foresense Posted March 11, 2012 Author Share Posted March 11, 2012 yeah that cymbal is kind of tripping over itself hehe, fixed that part now.. beats are kind of rough and will do some more work on that, probably add a few bars, maybe come up with some new parts.... will see :) thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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