Some of my new stuff

[Guest Feynmar]

Hey guys,

 

Having some spare time I decided to let my imagination run loose.

 

For the first song I decided to create a bit of a retro sound. It was popular once, so maybe it will rise again! The second one is more spacey and makes me feel like I'm floating in a multidimensional space. I don't know what that feels like, and that's exactly the point.

 

http://soundcloud.com/r-feynmar/paddy

http://soundcloud.com/r-feynmar/slotin

 

Hope that you guys like it, I am new here, so it's all fresh :).

[Guest yanG]

The first one sounds terrible at first listen, I stopped it as soon as the beat entered. I always allow myself to be rude to people who start posting tracks before they've contributed to criticise other users' music. Came back to it after playing the second track, assuming the all the cheese was on purpose, but even on purpose it's noy mt kind of cheese.

 

The second one is a lot better, though it lacks originality, it sounds like it's trying to say something.

[Squee]

...I always allow myself to be rude to people who start posting tracks before they've contributed to criticise other users' music.

 

Feynmar, remember to give other people feedback before posting your own stuff :)

http://forum.watmm.com/topic/75391-read-before-starting-a-new-thread/

[BCM]

definitely preferred the 2nd one, some nice melodies in both though

[fxbip]

Yeah 2nd one for me too,love the drums and the cool spacey feel.Drums in the first one are a bit too much...but i guess its part of the retro sound so its more a matter of taste but i think things have more finesse in the 2nd one than in the 1st one.