randomAmateur Posted November 3, 2012 Share Posted November 3, 2012 I made some stuff yesterday night, that's one of them. http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/shes-already-married-im Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MisterE Posted November 3, 2012 Share Posted November 3, 2012 it's good for something you made in one night. but in my opinion it needs to have some more drastic changes to become a finished thing. for something you made in one night, it's pretty good. there are directions i could see it going in, so there's potential. i really like the dark uhh, acid bass synths that come in towards the end, with the sort of pads and stuff. nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted November 3, 2012 Author Share Posted November 3, 2012 thx man! and thx for the comment! I work pretty fast thou. polish is needed and it's coming sooner or later, I need to work on dynamics I'm not sure if I will be able to add more stuff thou ;) but I'm sure I can do better with better dynamics and a little more polish! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted November 3, 2012 Author Share Posted November 3, 2012 btw this was the first piece I've done in a kinda emo mode, depressed shiat, "she's already married / I'm alraedy dead" ;) so yesterday I made another one, it went pretty fast like ~30 minutes... lol it's dedicated to the homeless man at my place :), it'S not very good at all, but it's done in 25-30 minutes http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/mighty-waif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted November 3, 2012 Author Share Posted November 3, 2012 he was very smelly and very dirty, he wasn't able to talk fluently either so the track is shitty too :) lolol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted November 5, 2012 Author Share Posted November 5, 2012 sorry to push this again but today I've installed ableton... the first time I had a touch on waveforms hench I'm pretty used to step sequencer and piano roll... I couldn't find that on ableton I had a hard time rendering too... lol this is a totally wierd one piece improv work, http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/nonmusician-experience-ableton Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted November 7, 2012 Author Share Posted November 7, 2012 did some yesterday http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/parallel-mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted November 7, 2012 Author Share Posted November 7, 2012 just listen to the first and last one and feel free to criticise ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Friendly Foil Posted November 8, 2012 Share Posted November 8, 2012 You're improving. Still some weird choices of sounds here and there.Like that cymbal around 1:50. For some reason, that sounds a bit wrong to me. The melody is alright. Nothing spectacular, but it works. Some people would probably say this track is too repetitive, but I think you introduce enough new stuff throughout the track to keep it somewhat interesting. Again, it's not really a bad track. It does sound less preset-y than your earlier stuff, which is a good thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gritbox Posted November 8, 2012 Share Posted November 8, 2012 he was very smelly and very dirty, he wasn't able to talk fluently either so the track is shitty too :) lolol me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted November 8, 2012 Share Posted November 8, 2012 i gotta agree with Foil. nothing spectacular but you are getting there. so good work. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted November 9, 2012 Author Share Posted November 9, 2012 thx for the comments, I got a note for some crash sounds already in my pad, yeah the cymbal is presettish too. gritbox, if so I'll gonna hook you up with this pants you wanted and the socks too. usually I like composition and progression so it's a long fucking road for me!! All is done with VST, no effects/filter on tracks or samples, just on the vsts. thanks again for listening I know there is alot of really good stuff out there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted November 11, 2012 Author Share Posted November 11, 2012 I just did this, it "builds up" slowly the mainpart is between ~ 3-6 http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/untitledopksso-sl1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted November 11, 2012 Share Posted November 11, 2012 it sure does build up slowly. lol this isnt that bad. pretty good in fact. sounds a bit like menu music to a game or the title screen of a DVD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hermann Posted November 13, 2012 Share Posted November 13, 2012 I really like it when all the parts come in, very 80s cheesey synthesised sounds along with inditerminable rythm, i really like that combination. However the intro didn´t do it for me.. Just sounded kind of, well, amateur i guess haha. Just a bit too midi and un-produced. i´m liking where its going Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted November 13, 2012 Author Share Posted November 13, 2012 I want to put my hands on this in the future, I'll do a short version of that one too thx for the listening guyse :DD ! I made 3 new, each is ~3 minutes I like this, I need to make it louder or somewhat.. http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/untitled4648 the volumes/dynamics are not very good, the end makes no real sense, bassline is just static http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/6465465488-1 Didn't want to upload this at first, if you listen to it take care for the random melody! ~1:48 lol http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/untitled6454-sl1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted November 13, 2012 Share Posted November 13, 2012 sorry to push this again but today I've installed ableton... the first time I had a touch on waveforms hench I'm pretty used to step sequencer and piano roll... I couldn't find that on ableton I had a hard time rendering too... lol this is a totally wierd one piece improv work, http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/nonmusician-experience-ableton So if I was you I would make use of the sounds you've created here. Cut it up, sample it, and build something from the sounds in this track - I'm talking about the part at 1:24. A slow and deep 4/4 on top of those slightly distorted pads would be great. It doesn't take much more than that. But you should definitely work on creating a sound you like and your buildups. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted November 13, 2012 Share Posted November 13, 2012 the volumes/dynamics are not very good, the end makes no real sense, bassline is just static http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/6465465488-1 i like this one quite a bit. sounds like it should be in Mass effect. i think you should spend more time on it cause you could really make this into one of your best pieces. definitely need to work on the mix and of course "insert the usual preset sound comments here". youve got all the parts there and don't need to compose any more. youve just gotta tweak the sounds around till you get them just perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted November 14, 2012 Author Share Posted November 14, 2012 @squee I did this "on the fly" in 13 minutes, I was quite suprised about it tbh. lol The sounds came along with ableton 9, I changed the waveforms here and there, the mainsound is even presett. Abelton seems to be rly nice, I like it quite alot. I think I'll try to work with it in future. I'm used to FL. @frankie Okay, I'll take that advice. I like intro and backround music for games and movies, so for me thats quite a compliment. -- I'M quite mad at the moment, I made another 2 yesterday 1:41 and 4minutes.... only listened to them on headphones, I think my music works only with headphones most of the time http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/untitled43463sl2 http://soundcloud.com/just-a-random-amateur/untitled555sl11 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schlitze Posted November 14, 2012 Share Posted November 14, 2012 Nice track man. Very Plaid Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hermann Posted November 15, 2012 Share Posted November 15, 2012 Your music is really starting to grow on me :) It´s very playful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hermann Posted November 15, 2012 Share Posted November 15, 2012 I do wish though that you would create endings to your tracks, because at the moment they all just sound like concepts/experiments. I´d like a more fitting way to hear the track end if that were possible :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted November 26, 2012 Author Share Posted November 26, 2012 Thx alot for the comments, I feel a bit wierd right now, I think I have to change everything if I want to step up, let's see .. ; ) If I listen with my stereo I don't like many of my songs. Even with my headphones I only like about 5-10% buuut I'm not giving up! I know it sucks to have a sound just breakup in the middle of everything, sorry about it. I also finally start to realize that starting a new thing everytime is kinda difficult (i don't say stupid but in my case maybe it really is), I just don't like my stuff enough to rework on it so I guess I'll change my settings and then go on do crap like now just with a midiC and better settings. how to produce crap, everyting needs to be done with a mouse no midi controller and also needs to be complete within 1 session (it's ok if you arange it on the next day), I'd be sad if I could not do it better in future! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomAmateur Posted November 26, 2012 Author Share Posted November 26, 2012 I don't get why I like this https://soundcloud.c...untitled555sl11 on headphones, but not so much on my stereo :? Here are is my new stiff nothing better than my old but whatevver not sure about the first, I'm not sure about arangement and the sound itself, the beat ough... https://soundcloud.c...eur/farpischord more intro/ambient like https://soundcloud.c...-random-amateur https://soundcloud.c...-random-amateur and this newb crazyness https://soundcloud.c...tledfasdfsd-sl1 wtf is wrong with the links ? WTF! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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