Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 3, 2013 Share Posted April 3, 2013 Hey! :) I'm new here and have to say, I really like the forums! I'm going to listen to as many songs as I can and try to give feedback! :) Meanwhile, I would like some feedback myself! If you like it, hate it, whatever, feel free to comment your opinion! :) I'm not sure how to link it so the soundcloud player appears haha.. [sc5]84416328[/sc5] The genre is Electro House and made with Fruity Loops Studio 10! :) Please let me know what you think! -Urbanturkin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zkreso Posted April 3, 2013 Share Posted April 3, 2013 Sounds cheesy and hella commercial. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 3, 2013 Share Posted April 3, 2013 Sounds cheesy and hella commercial. Allright I'm sorry you feel that way! :D I actually wanted it a little commercial. Thanks for the comment! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted April 3, 2013 Share Posted April 3, 2013 Sounds cheesy and hella commercial. ...and making commercial music is bad, because...? His tune might actually be sellable and some people would probably buy it unlike 90% of the shit that gets posted here. Should everyone just keep on trying to make terrible Analord ripoffs instead? Anyway, your tune is not really my style but I can definitely see what you're going for. Mixwise I would say that the main lead (2:31) is too loud - or something? Try re-EQing it because the drums kinda drown in the lead and then you could probably side chain the shit out of the drums if you wanted. That would definitely help. But to begin with I would probably just re-EQ the synth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 3, 2013 Share Posted April 3, 2013 Sounds cheesy and hella commercial. ...and making commercial music is bad, because...? His tune might actually be sellable and some people would probably buy it unlike 90% of the shit that gets posted here. Should everyone just keep on trying to make terrible Analord ripoffs instead? Anyway, your tune is not really my style but I can definitely see what you're going for. Mixwise I would say that the main lead (2:31) is too loud - or something? Try re-EQing it because the drums kinda drown in the lead and then you could probably side chain the shit out of the drums if you wanted. That would definitely help. But to begin with I would probably just re-EQ the synth. Thanks for the comment! :) Yeah the main lead is too loud...I realized it before I uploaded the song but the file got corrupted -.- And no backups were made...So if I want to change anything I have to remake the whole song. :D I probably will do it someday...but for now, I don´t have the time! :D Thanks! -Urbanturkin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
747Music Posted April 3, 2013 Share Posted April 3, 2013 Hey this isn't bad at all. Quite commercial, but I agree with Squee, commercial doesn't mean bad. that sucks you lost the data for the song. This song really isn't my cup of tea, but I'm looking forward to hearing what else you come up with. Cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adieu Posted April 4, 2013 Share Posted April 4, 2013 Sounds cheesy and hella commercial. ...and making commercial music is bad, because...? His tune might actually be sellable and some people would probably buy it unlike 90% of the shit that gets posted here. Should everyone just keep on trying to make terrible Analord ripoffs instead? Anyway, your tune is not really my style but I can definitely see what you're going for. Mixwise I would say that the main lead (2:31) is too loud - or something? Try re-EQing it because the drums kinda drown in the lead and then you could probably side chain the shit out of the drums if you wanted. That would definitely help. But to begin with I would probably just re-EQ the synth. You're the moderator of this forum and you just called 90% of the music here shit. Weow... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted April 4, 2013 Share Posted April 4, 2013 Sounds cheesy and hella commercial. ...and making commercial music is bad, because...? His tune might actually be sellable and some people would probably buy it unlike 90% of the shit that gets posted here. Should everyone just keep on trying to make terrible Analord ripoffs instead? Anyway, your tune is not really my style but I can definitely see what you're going for. Mixwise I would say that the main lead (2:31) is too loud - or something? Try re-EQing it because the drums kinda drown in the lead and then you could probably side chain the shit out of the drums if you wanted. That would definitely help. But to begin with I would probably just re-EQ the synth. You're the moderator of this forum and you just called 90% of the music here shit. Weow... You know I don't actually mean 90% of it - exaggeration furthers understanding, right? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 4, 2013 Share Posted April 4, 2013 Hey this isn't bad at all. Quite commercial, but I agree with Squee, commercial doesn't mean bad. that sucks you lost the data for the song. This song really isn't my cup of tea, but I'm looking forward to hearing what else you come up with. Cheers. Hey thanks! :) I'm working on a new song right now! This time I'm going to focus on the quality of the song! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 7, 2013 Share Posted April 7, 2013 Anymore comments guys? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BCM Posted April 7, 2013 Share Posted April 7, 2013 my girlfriend fucking loves this. me, on the other hand... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 7, 2013 Share Posted April 7, 2013 my girlfriend fucking loves this. me, on the other hand... Haha your girlfriend has good taste! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 8, 2013 Share Posted April 8, 2013 Nobody else? :) My song has got tons of attention on SC lately! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
4d0 Posted April 8, 2013 Share Posted April 8, 2013 it's on the simple, shallow end of the stick Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squee Posted April 8, 2013 Share Posted April 8, 2013 Make sure to give other people feedback as well or else nobody will give you feedback. I know you've already commented on a couple of tracks, but the more the better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 8, 2013 Share Posted April 8, 2013 Yes ofcourse, so sorry! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caged Element Posted April 9, 2013 Share Posted April 9, 2013 Sounds cheesy and hella commercial. I have to agree. A for effort tho :-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caged Element Posted April 9, 2013 Share Posted April 9, 2013 I like Aperture Audio. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Urbanturkin Posted April 9, 2013 Share Posted April 9, 2013 Thanks for the comment! Damn your avatar is freaky! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caged Element Posted April 9, 2013 Share Posted April 9, 2013 Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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