granty Posted May 22, 2013 Share Posted May 22, 2013 My latest effort - reminds me of Nick Kershaw for some reason... hope you like! https://soundcloud.com/lo_five/ridin-on-air Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted May 22, 2013 Share Posted May 22, 2013 pretty cool. id say though that first half kinda goes on too long, especially since all the action is in the second half. i would also change up the piano progression too. it does get a little stale after a while. cool track man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted May 22, 2013 Author Share Posted May 22, 2013 Cheers for listening - it was one of those where I couldn't figure out where to take it, so there isn't much variation in the chords/melody. I might record some guitar over it, see how that goes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted May 23, 2013 Author Share Posted May 23, 2013 Made a few changes - trimmed all the fat off: https://soundcloud.com/lo_five/ridin-on-air Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cloud capture Posted May 23, 2013 Share Posted May 23, 2013 Very nice positive vibes. Clear & bright pads & chime sounds balance the somewhat distorted acoustic drums nicely. All the melodies work together really well. Thanks for sharing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted May 23, 2013 Share Posted May 23, 2013 oh man, this sounds amazing now. great changes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted May 23, 2013 Author Share Posted May 23, 2013 Thanks folks, appreciate it ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stock Posted May 23, 2013 Share Posted May 23, 2013 Great track indeed (didn't listen to the first version so I can't compare the two). Really like the piano, it sounds very clear. Nice work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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