hokum Posted June 18, 2013 Share Posted June 18, 2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted June 18, 2013 Share Posted June 18, 2013 heh, there ya go. only did that cause this is a pretty cool song. really like the sounds you used. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stock Posted June 18, 2013 Share Posted June 18, 2013 Sounds great indeed :) The intro is a bit too reminiscent of BoC track "One Very Important Thought" imo and the ending is a bit too abrupt maybe, but otherwise it builds up very nicely and it's a pleasant listen for sure ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcbpete Posted June 18, 2013 Share Posted June 18, 2013 Is it meant to stop like that or is there a segue into another track ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hokum Posted June 21, 2013 Author Share Posted June 21, 2013 thanks for the listens. exhausted on endings... BOC just so happened to not be in mind at the time though it's quite a compliment i'm taking. I was on the airplane and plugged into the jack in my seat. On channel 9 was the pilot communication so i ran it right into audition immediately and captured about 45 minutes... they argued and one of them apologized for losing his cool. we laughed aloud whilst passing headphones around and this track was the product after i got home. my previous post was the track written on the plane itself... for some reason the air joltz my creativity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qatarsis Posted June 21, 2013 Share Posted June 21, 2013 haha, funny story about that dude :Pi really like this laidback vibe, definately reminds me of flying, it would fit quite well in some kind of fluffy game :Pyea the end comes a little bit too fast, longer outro would be nice well done ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted June 21, 2013 Share Posted June 21, 2013 nice & smooth, maybe make the drumparts louder and/or the synth bits lower in volume? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hokum Posted June 24, 2013 Author Share Posted June 24, 2013 good feedback... good suggestion... i'll try it for sure...djeroek i appreciate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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