perunamuusi Posted January 2, 2008 Share Posted January 2, 2008 im not sure if i like where this is going or if its total shit the bassline halfway through was a total afterthought (changed) the 4/4 bit in the middle will probably go (changed) (or at least change the kit for that bit) the use of the amen feels a bit unneccesary (more amen) but i like what the amen does just before it goes again it is in no way finished yet (still) do you have any opinions ideas suggestions ? updated file... 05 night night.mp3 BIBISHI.MP3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G. I. Raffe Posted January 2, 2008 Share Posted January 2, 2008 Nice. Personally I would drop the Amen and put more pads in. Replace Amens with more synth drums perhaps. That's just my opinion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted January 2, 2008 Share Posted January 2, 2008 4:00-4:42 is nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cuubjan Posted January 2, 2008 Share Posted January 2, 2008 Its a pretty awesome track overall, for the melody and such the amen fits decently but at times it seems a bit heavy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ezkerraldean Posted January 3, 2008 Share Posted January 3, 2008 yeah, it works quite nicely. i dont think the amen is overly heavy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pylonbitch Posted January 3, 2008 Share Posted January 3, 2008 amen is played out man. move on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
perunamuusi Posted January 3, 2008 Author Share Posted January 3, 2008 updated attachment rearranged it sped it up remixed it a bit etc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
perunamuusi Posted January 3, 2008 Author Share Posted January 3, 2008 thanksyou for your thoughts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yanG Posted January 4, 2008 Share Posted January 4, 2008 didn't like the amen either... i think you shoul replace them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gunnar Posted January 5, 2008 Share Posted January 5, 2008 i disagree. i think the amen fits nicely (i'm a sucker for it). might do with some more hihat action for it to flow better, and a deep bassline to compliment it. maybe add a tad of reverb action Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneaksta303 Posted January 6, 2008 Share Posted January 6, 2008 i likey! keep the amen... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest naos Posted January 6, 2008 Share Posted January 6, 2008 amen fits nicely, I would still go for more analogue sound, make it a bit warmer, tape-like. the beat around 03:00 is just great. nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
perunamuusi Posted January 6, 2008 Author Share Posted January 6, 2008 cheers for listening and commenting chaps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erichodge Posted January 9, 2008 Share Posted January 9, 2008 definitely not total shit IMO. i think the FEEL of the amen is good... its nice to have a break there, but why does it have to be the amen? you could write your own break... the hats in the rest of the track are so good... just layer another kit and have some fun... or else pull in a more random break sample. just my opinion. the melody has a nice feel here... the mood and expressiveness of this track are good. i like the percussion a lot... i'd spend more time on the synth sounds... their sequencing and dynamics work for me... but at times they sound a bit hollow... good pitch, etc... just depth/texture. maybe some layering? regardless, nice work... definitely keep it going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
perunamuusi Posted January 11, 2008 Author Share Posted January 11, 2008 cheers eric.... i know the synths and levels need altering and sorting out much more even though i wacked it up on myspazz when i made this thread i think i wAS just eager to put something new on there i'll repost an updated ver. soon and re: the amen... i know i started the discussion by saying it felt unnecessary when i was making the track... but i can't understand how people can say it's done / played out etc ive loved that break for over 20 years now and i cant just stop loving it cause electronic music says its done with.... might as well stop using an 808 cause britney (or beyonce or whoever) name checked it in a crappy song might as well stop playing guitar cause jimi hendrix did everything 40 years ago might as well stop listening to tchaikovsky cause we have computers now etc :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brandi_B Posted January 19, 2008 Share Posted January 19, 2008 I like this song. Very uplifting. might as well stop listening to tchaikovsky cause we have computers now etc plz no. Tchaikovsky ftw. My fav. Even though I know you were being sarcastic. Still. Imagine what that man would've done with a computer. No screw that he did fine without. Anyway. Great track LUDD. ps - » Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... « balls Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G. I. Raffe Posted January 20, 2008 Share Posted January 20, 2008 both are great Dunc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
perunamuusi Posted January 21, 2008 Author Share Posted January 21, 2008 why thankyou dazzer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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