Guest placidburp Posted November 15, 2009 Share Posted November 15, 2009 Made this today whilst incredibly hungover. Been listening to a lot of Mosaik recently so it might have rubbed off a little on this track... It is a beat-less, quite sorrowful track. Not sure if I want to add anything else to it or just leave it as it is. Dunno about the piano at the end though, might sound a bit cheesy? Thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
data Posted November 15, 2009 Share Posted November 15, 2009 im only half way through this track and i love it to bits already, really beautiful. also, you don't need to add anything, i wasn't really expecting the piano, but it still fits. *loops* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest placidburp Posted November 16, 2009 Share Posted November 16, 2009 Cool, thanks mate. I wasn't sure if anyone would like it. Think I might change that whiny lead synth a little bit, it's a bit annoying. it's on soundcloud too now - http://soundcloud.com/acidburp/hello-again-1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skotosa Posted November 16, 2009 Share Posted November 16, 2009 It was a very refreshing tune mate. I could agree with you that the lead sounds a bit "Whiny". I'm currently listening to it on repeat while I do my test. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
data Posted November 16, 2009 Share Posted November 16, 2009 it's not! it's not whiny! don't! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Berk Posted November 16, 2009 Share Posted November 16, 2009 Beautiful mate, great one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest placidburp Posted November 16, 2009 Share Posted November 16, 2009 Cheers guys! I still might work on it a bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Benedict Cumberbatch Posted November 16, 2009 Share Posted November 16, 2009 remind me of sped up eno. the pacing feels too fast. i'd add some more space in there. let it breath. add a few seconds between each part on the intro. its very nice about 3/4 way through. the piano works but ends too soon. play it out for a minute or so. this track should be 10 minutes long minimum. i love a good rhodes sound. one repeated listens the part where it all comes together at the end is beautiful, and really should be longer. nice work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest mrx Posted November 16, 2009 Share Posted November 16, 2009 great track! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest placidburp Posted November 17, 2009 Share Posted November 17, 2009 Thanks so much you lot! Benedict - cheers for the advice mate, I took some of it. I don't think it's interesting enough to extend to 10 minutes + though! Anyway, I've done a slower, slightly longer version with some different sounds and rearranged it a little bit. here - http://soundcloud.com/acidburp/hello-again-1 I just hope I've not ruined it! thanks again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneaksta303 Posted November 17, 2009 Share Posted November 17, 2009 you fuck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest placidburp Posted November 17, 2009 Share Posted November 17, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneaksta303 Posted November 17, 2009 Share Posted November 17, 2009 lol yeah i like them both Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ryanmcallister Posted November 17, 2009 Share Posted November 17, 2009 lovely, definitely like the second one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest abusivegeorge Posted November 19, 2009 Share Posted November 19, 2009 Love it mate, great start to karmas mix too :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest bigs Posted November 19, 2009 Share Posted November 19, 2009 loved it, but i definitely think it would benefit from some texture! before the other sounds drop in, it just feels so empty and strictly electronic. some nice wooshes and clacks in the background would add an entirely new dimension! as everyone else has already said, though, it's a fantastic track... keep it up! edit: to elaborate if the noisy wooshes built into some sorta pseudo-beat towards the end that'd be mega cool. but this is your track now isn't it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest placidburp Posted November 19, 2009 Share Posted November 19, 2009 Cheers chappies! Appreciate the comments, and I'm still going to work on it some more when I'm on the mood, but it will definitely not be having any beats in it. I really don't think it needs it. I will be adding some more melodies and shit though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest bigs Posted November 19, 2009 Share Posted November 19, 2009 Cheers chappies! Appreciate the comments, and I'm still going to work on it some more when I'm on the mood, but it will definitely not be having any beats in it. I really don't think it needs it. I will be adding some more melodies and shit though. yeah, upon further review that would kind of kill it but i stand by my statement that some textures (at least in the beginning) would give it more dimensionality! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest placidburp Posted November 19, 2009 Share Posted November 19, 2009 Cheers chappies! Appreciate the comments, and I'm still going to work on it some more when I'm on the mood, but it will definitely not be having any beats in it. I really don't think it needs it. I will be adding some more melodies and shit though. yeah, upon further review that would kind of kill it but i stand by my statement that some textures (at least in the beginning) would give it more dimensionality! Cool, I totally agree. I will work on it some more one of these days, just can't seem to get my head in gear. Thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneaksta303 Posted November 19, 2009 Share Posted November 19, 2009 don't make it too busy. it sounds quite nice as is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
perunamuusi Posted November 20, 2009 Share Posted November 20, 2009 like it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Friendly Foil Posted November 20, 2009 Share Posted November 20, 2009 good. like.. really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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