Caleidoscopic Cave

[Guest capitan mission]

Hi, in the day that my country is reminding "Malvinas (falklands for the british) War" Im falling asleep experimenting new ground (for me). This is the result of some hours of work, its 4 am and I think that the track doesnt sucks, but obviously more work must be done.

What are your honest thoughts about it? I will appreciate feedback, specially about the mix.

 

http://soundcloud.com/capitan-mission/caleidoscopic-cave

[Guest capitan mission]

Ive completely remade this, in fact, is another track. So, if you have some minutes, tell what you think about the mix.