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Above and Beyond the Water


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Guest Hermann

Just finished this piece today, give it a listen if you feel like it :-)

 

 

Constructive criticisms are always welcome, but bare in mind it´s finished and won´t change.

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Really nice one. I like how it's progressive and how the differents parts come one after the other. I'll listen to it again on better speakers.

 

 

(oh and by the way I just finished to work on Bilif, check you soundcoud pm later ;)

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Loving the melody in second part and pads (are they synthesized?). First three minutes sounds a bit long due to absence of melodic content IMO but sounds very nice, especially metallic percussion sounds, which reminded I Care Because You Do ones.

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Guest Hermann

Thanks guys :)

 

Those pads, well... No they´re not synthesized per say. Maybe I just shouldn´t tell you and it would keep the mystery of them ;) No but seriously, they were created through a long process of editting and fucking things up as much as possible!

 

I guess I was just having too much fun with those percussions in the first half yeah. But I made the second half significantly long enough I think to balance it out.

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Guest Frankie5fingers

i think the intro takes too long. the drums alone don't really catch my attention. but once the pad kicks in that all changes.

really cool song.

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Guest drakmin

Reminds me of Future Sound Of London, take this as a compliment! I like your snare/clap, somehow it manages to be nicely separated yet belogs into mix with all it's variations. I liked 1:50 the best and 2:50 the weakest until it's combined with 3:30 melody. (though in this song even the weak is rather good ;]) 3:30 lead sound is awesome but the melody itself might be better if simplified just slightly. Steady kick drives song forward nicely and I was not bored. Maybe some hard distortions in percussion might have fitted on some areas of the song to add even more variation.

 

Good track!

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I really liked it by the end. Nice percussion & good progression. I echo the ADD complaints that it takes too long to get there. Solid work though!

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