granty Posted January 25, 2013 Share Posted January 25, 2013 Happy clappy and badly mastered but just for fun: https://soundcloud.com/low-five/ill-miss-this-place Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted January 25, 2013 Share Posted January 25, 2013 you never cease to impress me man. this is wonderful. the only thing id say is to turn up that synth youve got playing the melody in the background (starts at 1.23 i wanna say). other than that everything else sounds great! keep up the great work :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lucy Faringold Posted January 25, 2013 Share Posted January 25, 2013 really enjoyed this. My only minor comment is that I felt like the bassline was sticking a bit too close to the piano chords during the first two mins; would have liked it to have maybe picked out a different pattern at some point. But overall I love the vibe of this and the other stuff of yours that I've heard. Great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted January 26, 2013 Author Share Posted January 26, 2013 Thanks again folks :) both good points, think it needs few more breaks and fills sprinkled around to break it up a bit too. As before, thanks for taking the time to listen and give a useful appraisal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sergeantk Posted January 26, 2013 Share Posted January 26, 2013 Real choon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted January 26, 2013 Author Share Posted January 26, 2013 Thanks chief Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cruising for burgers Posted January 26, 2013 Share Posted January 26, 2013 lovely! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest No Pomo Posted January 26, 2013 Share Posted January 26, 2013 Sick Weather Channel vibe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sergeantk Posted January 26, 2013 Share Posted January 26, 2013 Upon relisten I have one minor criticism about the mixing. Did you compress the master bus? For some reason I feel like this track is lacking dynamic range. Sounds a bit brickwall'd. Especially the drums. That said I still think the composition in this track is wonderful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chassis Posted January 26, 2013 Share Posted January 26, 2013 A teeney tiny bit to much reverb on the drums for me, other than that solid work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted January 26, 2013 Author Share Posted January 26, 2013 Criticism accepted. It was very much cobbled together on a Friday afternoon before clocking off. Normally I bounce the tracks down then add multipressor and limiters to the mixed file, but decided to do all that on the master bus thinking it'd save time (how the hell did you spot that sergeantk??). Yep, it does sound a bit Go Team with the drum reverb so might take another look at that - cheers folks, you rule! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted February 13, 2013 Author Share Posted February 13, 2013 Just remixed and remastered this following everyone's feedback - changed the middle bit and added some flutes too: https://soundcloud.com/low-five/its-easier-this-way-remaster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 sounds perfect! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
747Music Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 This is quite a wonderful song. It has a really nice vibe to it. Nice improvements on the newer version too. I have nothing to complain about. Solid work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ambermonk Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 I only listed to the second revamped version, but it sounds nice. It's like an up-tempo BoC track. It's especially good for going outside on a spring morning.I can't think of any suggestions to add for improvement. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
granty Posted February 13, 2013 Author Share Posted February 13, 2013 Thanks folks, you've given some invaluable feedback and its a blast when people like your stuff, very much appreciated :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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