Worlds Most Johnsson Posted November 10, 2014 Share Posted November 10, 2014 Hello! I made this melodic track that might need some softening on the synths or how to put it. But regarding the melody, I have a question for watmm. Is it very typical or predictive? Or is it wtf? I think I usually make melodies like these, kind of simple ones. But I would apreciate some fedback regarding the "chord progression" or what to call it. Very greatful for some feedback! https://soundcloud.com/unkorecords/onajs-onajs-theme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcbpete Posted November 10, 2014 Share Posted November 10, 2014 Very Plone-esque (if you've no idea what I'm talking about check this album: https://bleep.com/release/4279-plone-for-beginner-piano). Perhaps embrace the old school cheesiness in the mixdown by making the thing a bit more lo-fi. I think the only thing I'd change is the breakbeat - seems a little out of place, but apart from that: I like ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hoggy Posted November 10, 2014 Share Posted November 10, 2014 so so wicked trippy tune, i love it you could maybe edit the breakbeat to put your own sounds on the hits? more unique sounds like fm squerps maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest The Bro Posted November 10, 2014 Share Posted November 10, 2014 I think my favourite part was when the breakbeat kicked in. Gotta be honest though I don't really think I was feeling the melody. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Worlds Most Johnsson Posted November 10, 2014 Author Share Posted November 10, 2014 That's some quick responses. As we say in Sweden "taste is like the ass cheeks, divided". I appreciate the feedback it a lot, thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
th555 Posted November 13, 2014 Share Posted November 13, 2014 It's cool, my swedish asscritique would be that the rhythm of the melody is a tad boring, though it gets nicer towards the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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