Guest placidburp Posted May 24, 2008 Share Posted May 24, 2008 I wish I could make something as good as this again. Not to parp my own trumpet, but I do think its a pretty good track! Please tell me if you like it or not, and if not why not. also any suggestions to make it bettar! pleasethanksbye! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted May 24, 2008 Share Posted May 24, 2008 this really is very good all the elements are there and it progresses satisfactorily good show Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beneboi Posted May 24, 2008 Share Posted May 24, 2008 sounds like wisp but the drums are weak Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest placidburp Posted May 24, 2008 Share Posted May 24, 2008 this really is very good all the elements are there and it progresses satisfactorily good show Cheers mate as always! sounds like wisp but the drums are weak How can it sound like Wisp if the drums are weak? Please explain an i'll try and make 'em a bit stronger. Cheers. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Chris Martin Posted May 25, 2008 Share Posted May 25, 2008 sounds like wisp but the drums are weak I do hear the Wisp-influence but I think that it also has distinct originality to your credit which sounds great! I wouldn't say the drums sound "weak" as much as I would say that they could be tweaked a little (e.q. the drums a bit because the kick sounds very loud) or this could just be the way it sounds on my speakers. Everything else is spot on! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salvatorin Posted May 25, 2008 Share Posted May 25, 2008 I think the weak sounding drums can be accredited to the tinny and non-affronted sound they have, as well as the repetitive areas. But overlooking the drums, it is quite a great track. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest pawwa Posted May 25, 2008 Share Posted May 25, 2008 Very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FLA FUR BIS FLE Posted May 25, 2008 Share Posted May 25, 2008 Hey Mike, didn't know you were posting here. This track is one of my favorite recent electronic music tunes. Love that detuned/chorused synth that pops in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest greenbank Posted May 25, 2008 Share Posted May 25, 2008 really nice melody, all of it, and quality tune in general but i agree that the drums sound a bit funny, i wouldnae say 'weak' in terms of the individual sounds or the structuring but they sound a bit squashed up rather than fully up-front in the mix as a whole. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Promo Posted May 25, 2008 Share Posted May 25, 2008 I thought the drums were interesting. They have a weird sort of crackly stretched feel to 'em. Good to hear punchy drums that aren't amen! Yeah sort of big epic tear jerker type of melody in here also. Dunno if I was instantly feelin' it on a musical front but I know its good .. if that makes sense. Prolly another day I'll be like totally feelin' it melodically. Overall I reckon it'd been good if the drums lasted a bit longer and also if there was say a transition to make it a bit more interesting as it does get a little repetative. Production as always seems tight to me. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oyster Posted May 25, 2008 Share Posted May 25, 2008 Well delightful. The melody just soaks into the empty space in my skull and coats it in a beautiful yet slimy substance as though it will be there forever. The subtle stabs of distortion and the high pitched little noises against the melody. The drums are there, they are there and seem like they should be there the way they are, beautifully disgusting and yet the strings sound like a choir of water, disgruntled children who are hungry and want supper, the song is like sledding, like sledding away for ever down the ice coated hills, against a night sky full of stars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dpek Posted May 25, 2008 Share Posted May 25, 2008 Very nice indeed! You clearly spent some time on it Edit: And oh yeah I really like the drums! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ominous Posted May 25, 2008 Share Posted May 25, 2008 this is my favorite track from that "falty & friends" compilation! more of this please, nice use of different rhythms throughout the song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest placidburp Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 Thanks everyone for the comments/suggestions. And cheers Pod! That review was ace! :D Some very mixed comments about the drums I see so I have done a different version with completely new drums, I went for a Wisp feel! Hahaha! Thanks again for listening! Mike Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest chrismorgan Posted May 26, 2008 Share Posted May 26, 2008 Very, very nice.. I love the feel of this track. Good work man!. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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