Guest yanG Posted November 16, 2012 Share Posted November 16, 2012 I have to work the transitions, and some parts are a bit boring, have to fix it, other than that it's got moments i'm pretty happy with... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Frankie5fingers Posted November 16, 2012 Share Posted November 16, 2012 this is really cool. but those drums got annoying after awhile. have them switch up every now and again. and you could even use them to do percussive transitions. i think that might help a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Posted November 17, 2012 Share Posted November 17, 2012 A really nice one ! My overall criticism would go towards the fact most of the parts come one after the other quite quickly and could in my opinion develop themselves better (note : I often have the same criticism about my own music). The transitions didn't sound bad to me, I like the fact they are pretty straight forward. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yanG Posted November 18, 2012 Share Posted November 18, 2012 this is really cool. but those drums got annoying after awhile. have them switch up every now and again. and you could even use them to do percussive transitions. i think that might help a lot. A really nice one ! My overall criticism would go towards the fact most of the parts come one after the other quite quickly and could in my opinion develop themselves better (note : I often have the same criticism about my own music). The transitions didn't sound bad to me, I like the fact they are pretty straight forward. Thanks both for your criticism, I've updated the file, follwing some of your advice. I still need to give the drums some more variation, and I've come up with another part I have to develop and make transitions for :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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